Very sweet. Keep updating

Nicely written. Keep updating

Ah, so sad!

Odd, but well done. Beautifully written, in the characterizations and expectations and the silence. I love the fact that the only dialogue is "don't come back" but it isn't attended to at all.

Shvsggesd. Flangsty rodrab, what more can I ask? This is gorgeous and raw, darling. Fabulous.
I love the bit about knowing it will never last but starting it anyway - that's so /them/

Oh god...this was so...so...perfect. And sad.
I just wish that they had a happy ending, if anyone deserves a happy ending it's Sirius and Regulus.
This was a great oneshot, so much emotion packed in here.
Thanks for writing it!

At first I thought it was Lily he was torturing and I kept thinking, "No, not Lily." But when you add her at the end, it makes sense that he knows vaguely who she is because of Snape. I felt for Mary, though, and you wrote the torture terrifyingly well, for just three students in a hallway. Fabulous work.

But... I want more :P

I want to know what happens, dammit. This was written really well and I like the idea of this pairing (I think I've decided I like Draco in slash pairings best... and Drastoria).

But anyway, I loved this. Well done.

Well now... you had me at "He comes to your bed, shirtless and blond hair messy." (Though I perhaps would have said 'messy hair' hair messy sounds a little awkard)

Either way, my natural response was, "Well hell, there's plenty of room, jump on in!"

But all silliness aside, you write slash really well. I think the rating on this particular drabble might be a bit low. Sexual intimacy is slightly above K rating (in my opinion).

You wrote Blaise really well. He's a character I'd feel pretty uncomfortable writing, but I loved how he knew he was in denial towards the end. He sounds like he loves more than the sex, but perhaps that's just me reading subtext.

Uuuugh. Why do I read Lily/Severus fics? They make me so, completely, heartbroken! *sniffles*

Don't get me wrong, I love Jilly, but there's something about Sev that just pulls at my heartstrings, especially when I stop to think that after seventeen years... it was still about Lily. The word always somehow subconsciously makes me want to cry sometimes... true story.

And this, was absolutely beautiful. I believe I'm now a masochist because I loved it. I love how well you described his internal conflict, and I love how it was Lily that was helping to pull him away from the darker side of him. Even more than that, I love how he knows he messed up, but wants to protect her but ultimately gives in to the darkness.

THIS, MY LOVELY LADY:

"With her gone, you fall so much further than you've ever have. There's not an inch of you that isn't covered in evil. You become the one thing you never wanted to be; you become your father – the mean, bitter man that hates the world with such furious passion. And who you were when you were with lovely, lovely Lily is nothing more than a ghost of a memory."

Has completely inspired me on what to do for Severus' boggart (for a story I'm doing). So that little tiny paragraph alone, thank you, thank you!

SAM GOD HELP ME THIS MIGHT BE ONE OF MY NEW FAVOURITE PAIRINGS.

[When you are both spent, he doesn't spare you a glance as he gets up.] - I love how blasé Draco is, how he doesn't really care about Blaise. It's now my headcanon for these two, so perfect.

[You need him because he makes you /feel/.] - YES. I love this line! The idea that Draco can make Blaise (untouchable, distant!Blaise) /feel/ and still not give a shit...asdfghjkllkhggjllsshkll.

[ So you press a kiss to his naked shoulder and speak for the first time. / "Don't come back." / He doesn't listen.] - My favourite part right here, and I can't even tell you why. It's just so unf perfection.

And the ending is gorgeous - I love how they both know it won't go anywhere but still can't give each other up. :3

I really, really love it. THANK YOU FOR THIS.

Well, dang. That was creepy as heck.
I feel like it should scare me that you write torture fics this well.

You did an absolutely fantastic job with both Avery and Mulciber. The flippant, off-hand way they treat the whole thing just makes it that much creepier.

I like how Mary is a typical Gryff and how Avery is almost scornful of that, because that strikes me as very in-character for both.

Well done.

YOU KNOW WHAT'S SCARy
THE FACT THAT I'D WRITTEN A SCENE FOR MY MULTICHAP IN WHICH AVERY TORTURES MAR ANYWAY
I LOVED THIS
FROM START TO END
I LOVED THE WAY YOU FLESHED OUT AVERY
HE'S SUCH A PERFECT LITTLE SLYTHERIN
AND MARY
IS
PERFECT
I DON'T KNOW ANY WORD OTHER THAN PERFECT THAT I CAN USE TO DESCRIBE YOU AND THIS AND AVERY AND MARY AND /HOLY MOLEY HOW CAN YOU CHARACTERISE LILY BETTER IN TWO SENTENCES THAN I CAN IN TWO THOUSAND/
ANYWAY
WHOOPS I LEFT THE CAPS ON
AWKWARD
THANK YOU SO MUCH BBY
/FAVS

I love the way they're so drawn to one another. Keep updating

"and she works in place" I think the word "a" is missing...

OHMYGOSH THE ENDING. THE ENDING, DARLING. THE ENDING. THE ENDING. THE– oops. Apparently I'm still broken. But this just broke me more.

This… I love the whole /atmosphere/ of it, where it's sort of a whirlwind type of thing where there's just no escaping it and I love that, because that seems to be how Marcus feels — caught up in the whirlwind of /her/.

This is wonderful. Just plain wonderful.