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I’m very late to the party but I must say that I adore this story. I’m soooo happy I found this, reading the first installment to this lovely take on the life of the Doctor and Rose I just say have to say that River and Jack have always been something that makes me so giddy. I’ve stopped midway through this chapter to say this, haha. The way you’ve weaved this story so far has left me constantly surprised and interested in where it’s all going. The non-linear timelines have me just smiling like a loon at what is to come! I started this story straight after the first and before I did I honestly just had to get myself comfortable for a wonderful ride. I’ve open a bottle of wine, popped a bag of popcorn, and snuggled down into my bed for a glorious adventure. I’m looking forward to where you’re taking me and I am so excited to read more. 3

I was never one to follow the 11th doctor... mainly 'cause the storytelling was pathetic and contrived. But this. The way you wove this and the tale before this into being. My goodness. Heartbreaking and transcendent. Beautiful stuff. You have my thanks.

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Love it! Again, the way you rewrite the familiar in a completely different way is wonderful.

Very emotional story. I can imagine going through all the things they suffered.

Because of this chapter, I feel the need to find a stoey where Rose DOES have two of the same Doctor and they have to share...

Clearly the Silence have no idea what they're dealing with in regards to Bad Wolf. They really should have expected it to be a lot harder to kill someone when they have access to that kind of power...

Anyways, I thought CoE happens before End of Time, and the Immortality Gate was found in the rubble of Torchwood Three? Feel free to correct me if I'm wrong.

Loved reading this story. I can't wait to see what the sequel had in store.

Mickey and Martha have a kid. And what about Luke and his friends?

What does MD stand for? Mad Doctor?

There's something I don't understand. In this universe they turn River into a weapon because they fear the doctor. But what about in Pete's universe? They were no time lords in any other universe and James and Rose weren't traveling yet. Unless they changed their future or had some other enemy they feared.

Another amazing piece of work.

Seriously?! This is really frickin amazing, this is. Dang it, no fanfic has ever made me cry this much!

And all of the deviations from DW canon actually make sense(well, as much actual sense as Doctor Who usually makes), from Rory and Amelia to Jack and River. Jack and River sort of surprised me actually, but they do go well together! All the flirting either of them could want!

And Jenny! You brought Jenny back! She was awesome in the one episode she was in! I reall hope they bring her back eventually.

Speaking of her, did you know that her actress is actually married to David Tennant? I was extatic when I found out! And, she is the daughter of one of the other doctors' actors! :0

Now, I am going to look for the 3rd fic if this series,

yay!