| Reviews for Glitch in the System |
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   xHelgaSinclairx chapter 21 . 3/7/2019 I'm so amazed by how detailed this story is! You've done an amazing job! Jori forever! |
| Alienzz chapter 1 . 9/27/2017 Beautifully done. In my opinion you should just change the character names and publish it as a real book. Awesome work |
| anonomous chapter 21 . 7/16/2017 good story |
| Max Tomos chapter 21 . 2/11/2016 This story is awesome! I can't believe I didn't see it before. |
| Novak Fan chapter 21 . 11/19/2013 Hello! Just finished reading your fic and damn I loved it. Just recently I got into this pairing -bummed that the show is over though - and I have been checking the fics. Tbh I'm not really a fan of this especific genre (robots etc, not really my thing) so I was a bit wary at first. But after I read the first chapter I decided to give it a chance, I'm so glad that I did. Love your writing and the way you did the character's voices but especially the relationship between the girls. I like specially the way Jade was with Tori. How she was still Jade but at the same she trusted Tori enough to show her her more vulnerable, softer side. It usually takes a while for fic!Jade to stop being mean and be that open and it's kinda frustrating. I really like it the way you did it here. And Tori was still cute and adorable but with this confident part of her that wasn't afraid to speak her mind up. Ah perfect. Also, no first person POV woo-hoo! thank you, thank you, thank you lol Sorry for the rant, I'm just excited :D I hope you keep updating the sequel,just know that you have here a reader that will keep checking your work whenever you feel like posting. Thanks for this fic and take care! |
| osnapitzbex chapter 21 . 10/9/2013 Wow. This story was just amazing... Like, it was beyond unique and I haven't read another story like it, in any if my fandoms. The writing was beautiful an you were able to make the readers feel every emotion the gang went trough. From happiness, to pain, to sadness. I can't wait to start reading the sequel. |
| osnapitzbex chapter 20 . 10/9/2013 Oh wow, thank god. I was having a mild panic attack right there. By thankfully there both okay... Well as much as one can be okay after an ordeal like that. |
| osnapitzbex chapter 19 . 10/9/2013 Wow, I did not see that coming, at least not that way. You did absolutely great writing it though! :) |
| osnapitzbex chapter 18 . 10/9/2013 Wow... This was just an action packed chapter... Oh no what's happened to Tori?! Ugghhhh D: |
| osnapitzbex chapter 17 . 10/9/2013 Wow Tori took a bullet for Jade, now THAT is romantic! :3 great chapter, I'm glad to see Beck and Cat especially back in it :) |
| osnapitzbex chapter 16 . 10/9/2013 Awwwwwwwwww! They're so adorable! Uhhh Robbie and Sinjin are very creepy! :/ the difference between the two Toris is fascinating to the reader too. I find myself very intrigued. |
| osnapitzbex chapter 15 . 10/9/2013 Hahahaha wow that was an awesome chapter, finally, I though sexual tension was going to kill them both! ;) hehe |
| osnapitzbex chapter 14 . 10/9/2013 Awww Jades such a sweetheart sometimes, and we all know Tori is! That moment was adorable! You know which one I'm talking about ;) |
| osnapitzbex chapter 13 . 10/6/2013 Another awesome and powerful chapter! :) |
| osnapitzbex chapter 12 . 10/6/2013 Poor jade, he doesn't always get the warmest of welcomes does she... Good chapter, Trina and Tori reunited :) |
