This was so sad, I almost cried. (it's so sad, you could say it almost rivals the ending of Allegiant)

OMG im crying

Amazing. Simply amazing.

This actually broke my heart, I'm pretty sure that if you go to Australia, you will find a piece of my heart there... I loved it and I can't handle the thought of my baby having to go through all that.. Great job!

That was wow! Never imagined Uriah could be so deep under all that jollyness. Great job.

No. Fourtris. U killed it. I kill you

This was SO GOOD! I can't believe how much pain and regret you can put into a one-shot! Its like each word was worth a thousand!

Great :) I like that you don't know who they are straight away :) x

And the tears start falling

Amazayn its beautiful, it rules...

rly rly rly good story...

You break my heart. I don't know why I read it. I mean, it's brilliant, but it's still heartbreaking. I'm not a fan of Triah, but you made it work. I always think of Uriah as so fun loving, and I never think that Tris would ever commit suicide, but you made it work. For that, I salute you.
Enough with the dramatics. You're amazing, keep writing,
a.m567

This was so sad :( and amazingly written.. :'(

Whoa. Intense. I love it, and I love Triah, and this... this i sjust so amazing! :)

Omigoodness, I love this! (For some odd reason I always really like stories where Tris dies- even though she's one of my favorite characters... go figure)