Five years later, ur probably so done with this, but it was short but really good. You being HotFender's fav brought me here. You both are amazing writers, blessed with the gift to write. Years later and your gift keeps on giving.

WOW! Helga is trying so hard not to fall back in love with Arnold. The only problem is that she knows she never stop loving Him and him her. I think Lila and Hedctor are a secret couple behind Helga back. i would be scared to go into that house at night. I wonder who put that heart there. They better grab Lila and get the hell out. Please update when you can.

Intense and intresting start here

I thought this was familiar. I now remember this. I was so hoping that Hector hooked up with Lila so Helga can be with Arnold. I like when the tables are turned and Arnold is the one that is so deeeply in love. I'm sad that Helga's home life is still bad. Please update when you can. This is a very good story.

Oohhh Poor Arnold and Helga! Life is not fair for them !

More!

Love, V.D.

I'm in love with the story line. The mood and tone as well. Interesting start!

Wow that's so sad. Amazing setting and idea.

WOW! I know Helga has worked hard to get over him. But do she really think that she could not fall back in love with him again. It looks like Arnold is not going to let her go again so easily. Please update when you can.

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Helga should stay with Arnold not away from him ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

This is an interesting start. How old are they? Please update when you can.

Hmm, Interesting start

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Love, V.D.

Let's go! You got this kid!