MY HAIR IS LAVENDER!

Misty was with Ash in Johto when Lily turned him into Ashchu so she'd know that it was Ash straight away. Also Brock (the awesome guy) was there too.

wow

so far this is a T rating(possibly less) but I would like to see a bit of M rated action in some places at least. as for Pikachu's name... I like the name Striker(like a lightning strike) as it fits with the electric theme and gives him a reason to want to hide it(seriously what parent hates their kid enough to actually name them that? nickname? sure. middle name? eh, I've heard worse. first name? mom, dad, I believe you know where to shove it.

Well I think pikachu should have a name maybe Bolt? And the evil group should be a group from another region coming to take revenge on ash.

1.t or Pika Thorne -XD the team name idea of mine sucks-

Please hurry with the update

Why has Ash been attacked twice by the same Pokemon? Why is it trying to kill him?

He should have no name and the new evil group should be team (I forgot what that water type that tried to kill ash was but thts what its called)

Pls continue this is one of my fab fanfics by far so can u carry on :)

I think the new team should be
called Team Vapor.

Hi.
That was indeed a short chapter.
Only you can say what rating that story should have.

I think pikachu is fine without a Name.

And maybe Team Phantom :-)

Have a nice day.

this is great! I just LOVE it!

Hey I'm a guy and i think this story is going great! Please continue.

Great Chapter, but Mimey (Mr. Mime) should have an appearance!