I actually taught myself military time hehe

Hi I'm the annoying reviewer that luvs ur stories, please update the upgrade

"I woke up all soar"
Aha
So, you woke up high

The Game Has Begun was published when I was only five years old. Just this summer, I watched both versions of Fullmetal Alchemist. Even six years after Lynette's journey in Amestris began, you still have people discovering the greatest OC Fanfiction for Fullmetal Alchemist on . After reading just a few chapters, I was hooked to TGHB. It was like I was lost in my own little world, the same as when I dance to my ballet music- the song and dancing becomes a part of me onstage. Lynette was and is the best OC I have ever seen in the FMA Fanfiction area. The story of her life fits into the Elric's but at the same time is one of her own. Not only that, but Lynette's perseverance is something everyone should look up to.
P.S. I'd like to see more about Ed and Lynette.
Just call me ArcticFrost304.

This female oc isnt any different from any generic female wanna be heroine oc. Who just want to fucking ruin the plot, be the hero or the damsel in distress or whatever. Then snag off their fav. Character for themselves, make them fall for them since shes the new herione and the act of falling inlove doesnt have to be that long and detailed as long as the character and the oc meet, they would fall in love with her either way.

Haaaa... just makes me cry why fanfics now a days is like this. It became such a sad excuse of a story this ones where oc is sent to their fav. Anime world and fall in love with who ever they want and just do whatever they want.

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This has been the best edxoc Fanfiction that I have EVER read. I will always come back to read this again and again; I just love this. I would recommend this to any edxoc lovers. Plus, it covers the main story points and saves Hughes! (SQUUUEEEEEEEEE!) So... Yeah. Just know that I loved this story out of all of the ones I've ever found. Thanks, MaryLynetteLuvsWriting, for a great story!

I will now award you 50 arbitrary points for blowing my mind with the whole bff with truth thing.

I have to say, I really appreciate her using the only thing she learned-and especially since it was unorthodox, as a defensive means.

Spoke too soon on the potential appearance of pits of despair.

Impression update: more kiddish than I was expecting. 1-10 with 10 being the most believable as far as character's reactions and chain of events, I rank it a 3.

That said it's fun. Lynette is probably 2/3rds crazy but seems like a good person (albeit an OP character) and at least I don't foresee a pit of despair in the near future. I'm enjoying it.

Lol
I love Lynette’s threat to Armstrong, just downright hilarious.

Sooo I just found your sequel and went "oooh then there should be a finished story!" then I saw that there was a newer version and figured I'd start there. Got to the end of the first chapter and only then realized it was only one chapter long.

So, here I am because I can't wait. First impression, you've improved! The first chapter of the remake is awesome. This one is a bit lackluster after coming from the other one but I'm still amped to read on.

! Completed the story in 2 days!

Wow. Great story overall. Can't say I was expecting the ending, and it makes me quite sad that you-know-what happened. I enjoyed Lynette, great characterization on your part. Not to nitpick, but couldn't Father just make someone else do human transmutation to replace her? Beyond that, I loved everything! Great job.