Oh-ho! This looked like just PWP when I clicked on it - not that that is in any way, shape or form a problem, of course - but it's actually more complex than that. Abuse of power, an unhealthy relationship, selfishness...very intriguing, m'dear. Could you possibly write a sequel? Exploring this would be really interesting. XD

...ouch...

This was great! Had sort of a swanky feel to it.

hmm. This took an unexpected twist there at the end now didn't it. :/ At first I thought Roy was just riling Ed up to fan the flames of passion, to entice Ed to act on his feelings, to get his freak on asap. While this did lead to the wham-bam romp in the alley, the ending was almost, well, sad. I feel kinda bad for Ed now. It's almost like he's trapped in this relationship. "Please, don't do this again to me. Please, just let me go." "You silly little boy, thinking I would ever do that. Because I won't." The last line was the clincher. "And there was absolutely nothing Ed could do about it." Yeesh, that makes Roy sound very controlling. :( "Rough" applies to this fic not only in the rough sex aspect but also in the rough feelings it generated.

Roy if you were smart you'd stop doing that, Ed has self-confidence issues due to his automail and by flirting and hitting on others like that hurts him and makes him feel like he's not good enough for you. When you pull stunts like that you're not just makeing him jealous you are hurting him, stop before it's too late!

Hey. Freaking phone won't let me log in . anyway YAY. you are alive! Keep up the good work!
*RSM