well, first of all... ur gay/ and i think this weould like never happen in the marvel univers sooooooo yaa... pretty cute tho...

that was awesome!

Wowww! I like it! No i love it a lot! ( •ω• ) make more stony please! You make them perfect!.\(-ㅂ-)/

This is my favorite fic about this couple I've had the pleasure of reading. Your story has a good pace and kept me completely invested from start to finish. I wish there were more because it's just so good! I absolutely love how you wrote Tony and Steve. I've only seen the movies, but they seem so perfectly in character and I think you capture their personalities amazing well.

I really enjoyed how you started the story with them being at odds with one another, which I think a lot of people tend to gloss over when writing about them. The part with the dance was really quite sweet and a very nice touch. I also loved how you wrote from both of their perspectives. Smut at the end was like icing on the cake! This fic is totally amazing and perfect. Thank you for sharing and I really do hope you write more of these two.

nice:)

Hey, cute little story. There is just something you should pay more attention at (espiacially at the beginningnof the story), it's that you change the point of vue (POV) inside the same paragraph ( and sometimes inside the same sentence). I mean, you speak about tony's point of vue and then switch to steve without really telling it.
Here is an example while they are dancing "Tony put his head on Steve's shoulder and he adjusted himself, releasing Tony's hand to wrap his arms loosely around him, pulling him a bit closer."

I'm just saying that so that you know about it. ;-)

aww-i love it. ive read many fanfics about firsts but you really captured it better than the rest. its really believable and beautiful. many praise and wonderful work.
love stevextony

I love this. I laughed during the fight/training scene. I really like the last line.

This story was amazing. I love the tenderness. It was very, very believable. I just have two minor bits of constructive criticism. Th first is grammatical, towards the end you kept tense shifting. You did it not only with in the same paragraphs but within sentences as well. The second was at the end where they were having sex it seemed a little disjointed and hurried. I know how awkward it is to write a scene like that. You just meant for fluff then the characters start to go too far. Just wanted to mention them. Other than that the story was absolutely amazing and I will probably save it to my hard drive to read again later.

Gracy

Aw! I loved it! Sweet and sexy as hell at the same time.
I really liked the part where it mentions Steve's "natural born confidence." In most fics that I read it seems that people forget Steve's stubborn, confident, knows himself, and is pretty self-sure. Even before the serum he was like that. He stood up to people who were 2-3 times his size and wouldn't back down even /after/ he got beat up. Well, going by the Captain America movie at least. .

I do feel that I should point out that there was a paragraph or two that was repeated. It was in the middle of the fight scene at the beginning. I believe it's when Tony's punches Steve?

Anyways, I can't wait for more of your brilliant writing. _