This was really well written. Great job.

I regret there aren't more RalofxHadvar fics on this site, but your story make up for the lack of others! It's just brilliant! Short, emotional, bittersweet... Just perfect! :)

I've always been interested in this dynamic. Nice imagery here, and well-played with the bittersweet theme.

Well done.

I really liked this! It was short but it uses the length effectively and gets the emotions across. I specially liked the descriptions of the two of them enlisting to the Legion, though my favorite line is how Ralof "disapeared into the snow" to join the Stormcloaks. Good job :)