Fantastic story. Really hope you continue I can't wait to find out what happens next :) keep up the great work, update soon please, this is great :)

What happened ? :(

Oh, how I wish you'd have gone on with this one. Very good story idea! Thanks for what you did write though! It was awesome up to this point!

I hope you do decide to update because your story is one of the best I've read of Haven. I sincerely wish that I'll see a chapter update in my mail soon :)

Just found this and I love it already. I'm so behind on Haven, but this story seems like it could be canon. Our writing paths seem similar and also different from many of the writers currently on the pit, so I am happy to have a kindred author, especially one so talented.

Now that Lola's dad is near will Nathan and Lola get the answers to their questions .

"Not true," Dwight said gently. "It wasn't that simple. Look, I shouldn't even be telling you this, but you deserve to know." He rested his forearms on his thighs, leaning forward slightly. "You were born in the in between. We don't know how or why that's possible. We have our theories, but none have ever been proven. We don't know your origins or your purpose. All we know is that you possess her abilities as well as a Trouble. You're a bridge between two worlds." *jaw drop* LOVE! And hello Dwight! You were missed :).

"Shh, Nathan. I wouldn't hurt you," she soothed, gazing into his eyes. "That's pretty much your problem, isn't it? You can't let people in, can you? You've been hurt too much." *sobs*

*Cat*Nathan? Kind of enjoying this ;).

While it took me a moment to wrap my head around loosing Audrey (and all that entails for EVERYONE D: D:...poor bbs.) I'm really truly enjoying this story. I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters!

Thanks for the update. What is so important that Nathan must leave?

Wow! I wonder what Nathan will do when he finds out Lola's relation to Audrey, especially now that they've gone to the next level. I'm sure that will bring out all kinds of conflicts.

Something tells me that even though Lola's nightmare with Shawn seems to be over, nothing will be smooth sailing. I'm really curious to see what you have in store for us!

I don't know if you're planning to ever bring Audrey back, but i guess you should take her name off of the description, it's very deceiving. I can't believe I just read a smut of Nathan and a random girl! And I've read almost 50k words of absolutely none of Audrey/Nathan.
I'm sorry, I'm not that ok with it. You should at least put a very highlighted warning saying that Audrey is not a main character here.

Great chapter! I like that Dwight is helping Lola to fill in some of the gaps-and what information! If I'm properly reading into what he's saying, that is.

Poor Nathan! Still so devastated by Audrey's disappearance after all this time. It also seems as though someone is capitalizing on that.

I am enjoying really enjoying the mystery here.

Very intense chapter filled with lots of details. It seems Audrey left more than a good reputation behind. Sweet how both Nathan thought to comfort each other. Now that Nathan is aware of Lola's trouble will he be able to help her find answers she is seeking. I think Lola's presence in Haven is going to answer some of Nathan's questions about Audrey.
Looking forward to more.