Yes, glad they’re gravitational pul brought them back together!

ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS! I recently rewatched this favorite old series on Netflix, and found these fanfic archives. I so wished i had this when this show aired on TV! even though you wrote this years* ago, thanks this was great read to the show ending i forgot drove me crazy!

A different sort of turbolift story but it works very well indeed. With, of course, a proper ending.
Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.

I am glad I found your two stories. Beautiful, thankyou

I love this story!
Very well written. Thanks a lot!

Awwwww I loved it. Huge grin here.

I love this.

Now this is a fun take on the "turbolift" style story! Thanks for posting it!

What a great take on the "turbo lift story". So well done and perfectly them! I have to say that I really like Admiral Marshall Stark as an original character, because he is who I imagine Kathryn would choose if she didn't, of course, belong with Chakotay. I loved his character in "One Single Step" also. Too often people pair her with someone cringe worthy in a post endgame, which, to me, would be out of character for her. The fact that he is likeable, smart, attractive and accomplished makes it more authentic, because we don't have to hate him, nor does he need to do anything wrong for us to know that ultimately she loves Chakotay. But, I digress, this remark probably belonged in my review of "One Single Step.

Anyway, I love the complexity of both your storys, they are so well woven and well written! Anymore coming? I hope so!

I've spent the last 3 nights reading your stories, and this is such a perfect take on a J/C! I love the way you write them, now the only problem I have is I want to read more stories by you.

I've read this story many times, so it's time I added a comment - I think this is one of the best J/C post Endgame stories. It's realistic and fantastic and captures their pain and transition from DQ to AQ so well. You did a great job on this! Hope to read more!

This was a really neat and unique take on the lift/elevator "genre." My experience with those is 'enter lift, stuck in lift, sexy time.' I liked the idea of the scenes being in different elevators. The concept would make a really awesome one-act play (if it isn't already).

All I can say is "Wow"
I'm stunned.

Amazing story! I really enjoyed it! I'm glad that everything worked out!

Oh this is great. What a creative take on the "obligatory turbo lift story". You had some really heartbreaking moments in there - when the two couples run into each other, when Chakotay leaves the turbo lift in the first scene. But through it all, through all the confusion and the heartbreak, the "heart of the matter" is so clear. Really beautifully written. Thank you for posting.