I love your story cool update fast and now I guess we ll have more jerza moments right

Please please pick this precious gem up again and write more! It's really nice. I rarely see such good relationship between Myst, Jel and Seig.

You know, I think you like Jerza. A a hunch. -MTheAwesome

Gray shut up and do stuff with juvia or whatever. This is for Jerza so turn away and let them be adorable

Aww stay strong jelly stay strong

Really nice plot you have there. You really captured the essence of the story and the relationship between Jellal and Erza. But points to note though, your story is a little rushed and that sometimes you have to check your grammar and the way you project your writing. Overall it is really good so far, and I cannot wait for the next chapter!

i love it! update soon!

well, i usually review more than this, but all i can think of is how you're writing a story that has school starting, when school just recently ENDED. and all that my mind can process right now is the burning in my mouth from some peppers i ate on a dare earlier, and the irony of this. I hope to read more of this story in the future! (lol, took me three tries to find the exclamation point... first ? then . then ! ah, it would have been funny if the order was ? . . . ! i'm having visions of tom and jerry now... and i'm also rambling. well, i'm going to force myself to stop now. *strained pressing of the ')' button* )

All the best,
A Random Minnesotan

It was really good. Please write and update a little more. Just so good...

hmm.. nice. both 2nd and 3rd chapters are nice. so, keep it up and now don't forget to update. and update sooner.

Awesome!Cant You Update!I so want to find out what happens!

Aww come on. Update please!

looks good! continue please!

Really nice! Good JOb! keep updating, keep up the good work and stay golden! update soon pls its really nice!
and pls check out my FT fic! and if a Detective Conan fan too so pls check out my DC x ft crossover too

Nice story! Keep it up! :)