Interesting Story. I personally am not a fan of a meek Scorpius, but I enjoyed the story for what it is.

Albums was blissfully ignorant in this one, wasn't he? But this fic was AWESOME!

Aww so sweet!

it awesome... Ok if you must torter me... /

YAY! I adore Albus/Scorpius. And you wrote them beautifully. I love your characterization of both of them. It's different from what I normally read about them. Albus being intimidating and kind of the odd one out is just awesome! And Scorpius being shy and not sure of himself is great.

The line where Albus compliments his eyes and Scorpius goes to do the same but Albus interrupts him... probably my favorite. It was so simple but so telling and I loved it.

Also, I absolutely loved and as well as felt horrible for Scorpius when Albus started well... whoring around... But when they finally got together it was clear that Albus really did care for his best friend and that he wouldn't do that to him. Your use of oc's was great and seriously I loved this. Nice job!

No sequal? Not even if I say pretty please? With a cherry on top?

Lol. This was so cute! I loved it! The way you wrote both Scorpius and Albus's personalities interacting in just the most perfect way. And the way you wrote the plot was just beautiful. :3

Not only that, but I love that it was Albus/Scorpius. XD