Good nice

I LOVE this fic. It keeps both Zuko and Ty Lee, and even Mai and Azula, perfectly in character. It doesn't ignore Mai to make the pairing happen. In fact, there is a deliciously plausible cause to all of this. I could totally see Ty Lee pulling this, and I could totally see Zuko reacting this way. He's an awkward Turtle Duck, after all. I could feel the quiet night. I could totally feel Zuko's defenses slipping away as he tries to think himself out of this situation.

Ty Luko is SO cute, yet not meant to be. You managed to respect all aspects of that, while still managing to write some GREAT Ty Luko. :D I love Zuko's thoughts about Mai, both in regards to Azula, and to Ty Lee. It was so great, and I liked the internal monologue and Zuko's pov. Great job!

Reading this was like crawling through glass. But in a NICE way. You're very good at doing anguish and torment.

Try to make a longer tylee/zuko fic

More would be great nice story

Write more plz