Epic Story dude. Shepherd is lucky to have a quarian gf with thicc thighs and nice plump ass, ripe for spanking.

You have a great story even though I disagree that tally was walking around after she gave birth you still have a great story keep up the good work

Great story, even though I disagree with the part that right after Tali gives birth she's walking around but besides that still a really good story keep up the good work

Wow this story left me having a lot of emotions yet I’ve still enjoyed it, not perfect but still fun to read.

Oh come on! That's a cop-out to avoid burdening Shepard with the concept of another male's baby!

You mean to tell me that a Quarian female wouldn't get extremely nauseous if the child was fully Quarian?

This story is stupid I am fucking done witb this piece of crap

screw this I am just going to skip to the point where she isn't indoctrinated this is getting stupid.

Goddammit I just want a story of shepard and tali settled down. This stupid unrealistic fighting is just annoying.

Yah, I prefer stories in which the main characters DON'T get raped, so... I'm out. I highly recommend Frillycakes' continuation instead; To Survive: Terminus Coalition.

So it's been over a year since the author started his first fan fic ... and what the fuck?! Why wasn't the rest of the story this good? I mean this is some ice cream standard work here, I just don't get it. The atmosphere was dense, the exposition was worked so well into the entertainment, and what a great hook for the story. I mean, it was as if the writer for this chapter was completely separate from the guy who would later mix up the various words for 'there' so many times. Now I'm just going to stop you right there, c'mon author it's primary school stuff, get your head out of your arse.

Is this why Calinstel approved this to bear the To Survive name? Because he read the first chapter and decided it was a representation of the final product? To Survive II was fun yes, but I would only reread it begrudgingly. I mean, the OCs were usable, but not exactly memorable. Except Dav, but only because he was laying down the foundations for the much better Peta in Prophecy and Requiem. But Hellion? I remember is name but, and he was an antagonist, but that's about it.

Okay I admit it, this is kind of a retrospective for me. I woke up this morning having the word '2014' finally sink in on me, and one of the things that came back to me is that September this year will mark two years since he started. And boy it feels weird having been on of the first people to read it. So how about I do an extremely brutal review of the entire series, and I mean every chapter, not the three lined reviews that I started out with, but the format that I use now. Including a rating. However I won't be reviewing every single day, I'm going to limit myself to around one every week ... or every few weeks knowing me. And I'll try and get the last one out on September 30th (which according to fan fiction is when this was published.)

- Ice Cream
- Milk
- Chocolate
- Egg
- Tomato Sauce Sandwich
- Poop Plop Mcplop
- Sucks a Fat One
So the Prologue for To Survive II: Aftermath is (like a I said before) ice cream standard. I just hope that I won't have to whip out 'sucks a fat one,' which I thankfully haven't had to use for a while. Also, a quarter the reason I'm doing this is because when I reread the reviews I gave, a lot of them are just embarrassing. I mean, I scolded the author for making spelling errors, but DAMN, the keys on my keyboard must have been rearranged or something, because I must have sucked at typing back then.

Wait ... I can only have one review of a chapter?! Uh, I guess I'll have to put multiple reviews in one ... review? Ah, whatever, this'll work (I hope).

nice reference to tobuscus in chapter 22 :)

This was amazing! I would so so love you if you wrote a fic on Veetor though, like he kicks some collectors Like It's a process but Veetor finally recovers and realises it would have not been without the help of his dedicated dr. Elan'Shiya, he also becomes the first quarian spectre! After finding out a quarian was taken away from the collectors, he sets off to rescue them only to find out it was his old psychiatrist, Shiya. Romance sexy passionate hot nurse/patient ensuesssss.

Please please? 3

Please? Do it for Veetor.. He needs a happy ending too! :D

Joker, take us to the Tonbay, now! EDI, contact Garrus and Wrex and tell them to meet me in the airlock." He then moved towards the elevator.

I so want to keep reading, but...you...killed the geth...

The geth don't die if you pick destroy in the game. Why did you change it?