| Reviews for Children of the Spiral |
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   MystiYew chapter 4 . 4/2 A shame there's no more. |
| Determination4296 chapter 4 . 3/8 good story |
| zft3 chapter 4 . 10/30/2019 if only there was more |
| DisloyalEye chapter 4 . 7/8/2019 more chapters |
| Ceridwen Kalamack chapter 4 . 5/13/2019 Why have you forsaken us? |
| Dragonman110 chapter 4 . 3/7/2019 Please update as soon as your able. |
| Princess Hinashi chapter 4 . 2/27/2019 it's a nice story, so sad it seem to be forgotten |
| Rebmul chapter 4 . 1/7/2019 its a shame that all these stories are dead |
| helrio uzugaku chapter 4 . 11/19/2018 Is this story abandoned or have you just given up on fanfiction? It's definitely fun to read and I loved the way it was turning out. |
| TheReaderofGods chapter 4 . 5/2/2018 Please update |
| Natsubi chapter 4 . 1/28/2018 yeah yeah, a week... sure, its just been 5 years and 2 months |
| Moon Dog 05 chapter 4 . 12/8/2017 Plz update soon |
| Monster King chapter 4 . 8/5/2017 Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on it so soon into the story. |
| princenjgv chapter 4 . 5/19/2017 its really awesome pls update fast and this will be only naruto x mito no harem pls |
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/21/2017 PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON |
