Please update. love the story!

What! i love this part do more of this story and i can't wait for the next one

Thank you and Texentes Verba for a lovely chapter. Life is rough so u understand if new updates are slower. I'm looking forward to an action packed next chapter. Wonderful job you two. Good luck with school. Thanks for the great story!

Love the banter between the grandfather and Jack's father. Excellent! Can't wait to read more.

I loved it. Great job!

Man you end chapters so well with tension and intensity. I am blown away. I'm still trying to perfect my chapter endings. Anyway, the grandfather is some problem. I can't wait till justice is served. Great job with the dialogue, detail and characters! Bravo again!

Losing control is never fun! Poor Jack. I like how you explored Jack's emotions towards the end. It was well done. Can't wait to continue on! Great job!

Oh man oh man. You don't have to apologize. Combat has always been hard to follow for me. Anyway that ending was whoa. I know Jack is under compulsion. This story is truly amazing! The characters, descriprion, and dialogue are all written well. Great job!

Great job to you and your collaborator. The fighting got a little muddled a bit. And toward the end I got confused by who was talking but other than that great chapter! Wonderful job!

I figured Jack was the star. Who else really? Anyway, I've always loved the big reveal. Man this story is so good! I love the original character. The grandfather was nicely crafted. You made him an awesome Villian. Bravo! I loved this chapter so much! Great job!

Whoa Kim's story is so sad. I w dee how she reacted to Jerry the first time she found out. Hm. It was probably bad. Again great detail and dialogue. The story is so good. Great job!

Bravo! This world you've created is extremely interesting! Like I love it. I like how there are hunters and half humans or non-humans. You've truly created a lovely supernatur fiction. I'm excited to see what happens with Jack's father and the grandfather. Great job! A little short but I totally understand.

Another great chapter. I truly like all the interactions in this story. I found it amazing that you made Jerry a werewolf. Genuis idea. Anyway I truly enjoy this fic. I'm so glad I found it. I know the father and grandfather will force Jack to join them. Maybe his father is under mins control now. He never did explain himself.

Anyway great job! Love the writing style an description! Excellent job!

Whoa! Another action packed chapter! I was wondering when Jack would snap. It had to be soon I said. Wow I kind of hope he runs to his father and grandfather. And the team has to save him but even if it doesn't happen I'm still reading on. This story is very good.
Great job with he detail, dialogue and the supernatural creatures. Bravo!

Loving this story with each chapter. Making a story supernatural has always been quite a favorite thing of mine. I like the character interactions as well as your original characters. They for well with the tv series characters.

You are amazing at depicting action. The dialogue was nicely excuted! I'm so glad I found this story. There was some typos in the chapter but I understand.