More. Make more. And more. And more. No time for a real life. Type more.

hahahaha. I love it so much 3

BEFORE READING THE FIC AND READING THE SUMMARY AND INTRO:
Me: (puts napkin on lap and wraps a binky around neck) I'm ready for the cheese.
AFTER READING THE FIC:
Me: (puts napkin down after wiping his mouth) Meh, I could handle the cheese.
REVIEW: This isn't really cheesy, this is pretty much the same thing you always right (at least the style). I like cheesy fanfics, ones with really cute couples doing cute things together, but with a lot of depth and thought put into it and with good writing. Whenever I search for these I always find my share of cheesy fanfics, and I like them all the same. Cheesy is a good break from serious, but you didn't really get cheesy, it was still pretty... average (for you anyway).
TIPS: I don't write fanfics (yet), but I would probably recommend you read a Venfuu fic from deviantart. Do you know Kingdom Hearts (the game)? Venfuu is basically the couple of Ventus (a main character) and Fuu (a minor character). Go to Venfuu's club on Deviantart and check out their fanfics, they are gloriously cheesy (and if you like them, maybe you can be a fan of this crack pairing as well ) I've grown so fond of them, even if at first glance they seem like an odd couple, the fanfics and artwork of the fans make it work). There are Venfuu fanfictions on too, but I personally think the ones on Deviantart are more corny and cheesy. ... And that's all the advice I'm gonna give you (or my two cents, whatever you'd like to call it), you can take it or leave it, I'll still read these Romantic Ways no matter what. :D
CHEESE RATING: Cheddar