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![]() ![]() I am not a fan of the Avengers. To be blatantly honest. But this made me pleasantly surprised. Dialogue was witty without being crude, romance was cute but not overbearing or smutty *shudders* I know I've read a good fanfic when I can see multiple aspects of the relationship between two people and in this it was evident. But seriously, this ship totally makes sense. DEAR GOD WHY IS IT NOT CANNON?! I don't know enough about the comics or the universe for that matter to know if that is true. *sigh* C'est la vie. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really great! Thanks for sharing this with us! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() really enjoyed reading your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait, Clint has a fractured knee and he's spending the entire day walking? Sorry, that doesn't work. I think you should have made the knee injury less serious if you wanted them to be doing all this walking. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story so far! I loved that you had Natasha reading "Bourne Legacy." I suppose you'll have them watching Mission Impossible: Ghost Protocol or Hitchcock soon. (Guess I'll have to keep reading to find out, eh?) I recommend that you get a beta reader. You've made a few errors like "who's hands" instead of "whose hands" (who's who is). Other than that, excellent work on this! :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mostrarle means "to show him" Mostrale is imperative for "show him" and therefore more appropriate for how you wanted to use it. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really loved this chapter :) great job! And I loooove deaf Clint. Its such an interesting concept and I cannot wait to read your version |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh you are so sweet to dedicate it to me:D I can't thank you enough, my birthday's been pretty good and you just made it better :) This chapter was awesome and I'm sad it's over! Your other story sounds interesting though. Can't wait! Thanks again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sigh...so romantic and sweet! Thanks for that fun read! Awesome story. I eagerly wait for more stories for you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really loved this story! Fantastic! :D It was so well written and I squealed so much! You captured Clint and Natasha so perfectly. They were written extremely in character and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this! Amazing job! Btw, I cannot wait for you next Clintasha story. I really really want to see something that focuses on Clint being deaf. I am so excited! :D |
![]() ![]() Yayyy this was cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "That's how we do this remember? You patch me up, I patch you up." ...Right in the heart. |