Cool story :D I likes it!

Ooh, Nile should make an appearence. Not to mention it'll help keep it connectd with Beyblade, since the story is all OC's and no Beys so far. But it's good. You should keep writing, just maybe add more Canon Characters.

It's up already! XD

*is too busy pointing out all my mistakes ;w;*

OK. So- I had a giggle fit as soon as Syron's name was mentioned. I was just all: TEHEHEHEHEEEEHEHEHEHEHEEEEHH EE.

HA. Whose crush is showing NOW, JAIDEN?

Ta-kun is in quarantine. That's BRILLIANT. TAKUME IS BEST PONY. It's official, he's my fav character. (Sorry Sy, you got booted out)

HOLY SHOES- HE REALLY IS NEKO-KUN.

OHMYCHEESE, THE SPARKLES. THE SPARKLES *Dies from the 'I'm going with you.' 'Leo...' part* OH MY CHEESE YOU DID NOT JUST SAY THEY SHARED A BED NOW I'M GONNA DIE FROM MY SHIPPER FANTASIES. GAH WHY MUST YOU DO THIS TO ME?