Yay rain

[aka italollapalooza23]

Reply to Akilina (since you're a guest and I can't contact you D:):

Thanks for the criticism! I made this fic a long time ago when I was young(er) and stupid, so of course I made a ton of mistakes. I mean, doesn't everyone? Eh? Ehhh? *silence* Oh... kay.
In one of my stories Kowalski makes some sort of a potion that helps Lolla eat candy- that's why she can eat chocolate without dying. I should've mentioned it earlier. ;A; (This is my regret face.)

It's nice to see that you stated your opinion concisely, unlike SOMEONE I know. /notnamingnameshere
Anyway I've moved on from this fandom now so I don't read my old stories now; in fact I've been deciding on whether or not to delete them. But if it still gets read I guess I'll keep it on here.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Same to everyone else down there. :D

I like the fic and your grammar is pretty good, which is something I applaud you for, but two things.

1. You have a few grammatical errors in which you switch tenses. Keep your writing in either past or present tense.

2. You are aware that chocolate is a LETHAL POISON TO DOGS, right? Really, any chocolate at all and your dog will DIE. Their digestive system can't handle chocolate.

Love this! Just browsing through, and ohmygosh! I'm a huge fan now! :) So, my answer would be the rain part. Thanks for this ridiculously great story :) :) :) Selena :)

Loved it. Especially when Skipper said "Not a problem, good sister, I'll just get some from Marlene!"
HE WANTS MORE KISSES. XD

Answer: Sharpen Pencils.

I think I'd preper the pencils. Love your story!

[ aka itsalollapalooza23. -.-]

Guest,

[1]. Check out my latest story Sausages, chapter whatzitooya if ya wanna know how I eat chocolate.

[2]. RE. READ. THE. STORY. Particularly the seventh paragraph if you want to know why we're sibblings even though I'm a cyoot goggie and Skippy is a par'noid pen-goo-in.

[3]. It's a sister thing. You'll be seeing that soon in one of my stories.

[4]. Why don't you try and look at your own *review* before you criticize mine? The hypocrisy is strong with you.

[5]. I don't care if I reviewed my own story twice. I could've typed this on my profile, but no one goes there. I could've typed it as a story but that's obviously against the rules. How else could I have done this?

[6]. PEANUT BUTTER!

i would go in the rain wearing only the clothes on my back for and hour- and when i read this i was laughing so hard- its hilarious and cute, plus if you say their argument really fast it sounds funny!

Sharpen pencils with a friend so ont get entirely bored! Didnt say alone! ;)

It's me, Captain Cynthia! :DDDD

*crickets*

*clears throat* Well then, anyway, I think this story is rather good! There's just a few bits and pieces that don't really make so much sense to me.

As for the Question at the end, PENCIL SHARPENING! I'm wearing shorts and a t-shirt! (It's very hot today where I live.)

For the question. It is hard to say. If I'm able to move around while in the rain and it's not raining too hard and is not too cold, then the rain. But if not, then the pencils. For the story, it is really good.

this is so stupi why would a dog want chocolate if chocolate KILLS DOGS!

first of all why is his sister a dog why does he have to do anything for her why is his sister so mean she woul make him find chocolate bars in a zoo five of them while going solo

That was awesome! Loved your story...And, as an answer to your question,...I'd rather stand in the rain. :)

Not bad for your first story! It was both funny and cute! Keep it up, and you're goin' on my favourites list!