Oh I really like this story, a very romantic, very delicate love story. But I still kinda feel a bit sorry for the lack of involvement of Pascal (and Maximus, but I understand that this isn't very possible to include it much).

I like the story, but so far I don't see enough involvement with Pascal (

I like the story so far

Oooh, what a promising start! Thank you for sharing this well written work with us!

So neither the king nor the queen is interested in why Rapunzel is no longer blonde? That part bothered me during the film, too.

She left him? Why? Are they after her too? I don't get it.

Just out of curiosity, why do you refer to Corona's cops as 'guards'?

This is starting to look like a tragedy. The king and queen will die without ever knowing what happened to their daughter. Once that happens, no one will ever know.

Lovely little story,and I like the fleshed out relationship. An enjoyable read through and through

Blindness? Yes! yes! Yes!

Hello there. Just started, but man I like how this AU parallels the fairytale. Makes so much more sense I guess than the rush in the film (but of course the film had only 100minutes to give a happy ending, so I'm not complaining. I love that movie.)

Oh, I loved this! Is it over or was there an epilogue? Thanks for writing!

This was a wonderful story.

I really liked your story!
Good job!

Oh I just love happy finally got their well waited happily ever after.