It's going smoothly! :D Lots of details that usually a lot of people would overlook; I keep thinking that there will be romance in the air soon *swoon* xD lol!

As for the person below me, it seems that they've been copy-and-pasting thier "hate" all over the stories, so I don't think it's hate, it's just "Oh I'm so bored I think I'll hate on them for fun." Bah, boredom tends to stir the strangest in people, yeah?

Yahoo! Okay, let me see...
Grammar's good, not too much mistakes. The idea of Kaze'Aze once being part of Lire's elf tribe remarkably fresh, and I find this story off to a great start! :)