This is incredible. Please, you need to continue, the plot it looks very good.

I stumbled across this story years ago, I’m glad you’re back, keep it coming!

I like how Roy rises to the challenge once he sees there is a challenge coming straight from the kid himself.

This is cute so far! I cant wait for them to—awww—start BONDING. It’s probably quite a ways off but like... trisha’s funeral... ed’s mourning and grabs onto roy who is his nearest source of comfort... think about it...
Just be careful how often you use caps lock! Italics can be at least as effective when used in the right place, and it doesnt crowd up the doc!

But I’m really enjoying this so far! Cant wait fornwhat’s next!

~YAJJ

I want to know what is going to happen with this history. Please update

ohhh can’t wait to read the revamp version of this fic :

Excellent story! Can't wait to read the next chapter! :D

This is a really interesting story so fat, and I can't wait to see where it goes. Is Edward still going to be an alchemical genius? I hope so; I can just imagine the look on Roy's face, it would be priceless :D

whats going to happen next? will Ed be in to alchemist?

Awwwww! You are so good. Ilove RoyEd so much. Update please.

How cute that Roy become Ed's real Dad!Can't wait the next chapter!

Please Update! Thank you!

haha sounds like Ed and Roy. XD but i must say they look nothing alike..oh well
I love how you made them act ;)

I don't know if any one told you but its spelled Hughes, and Risembool. I like this a lot so far! although I wish Ed was older, he seems older than five here, more like 10 because he's really smart
You did a good job putting them in character :))

I cant wait to see how Roy and Ed's relationship will develope and I'm anxious to see Ed's reaction when he finds out his mum died.

Please update ASAP!