Reviews for Scintillation Model
reppad98 chapter 3 . 10/5/2018
Hahaha, ah, this was a really amusing story. It's a shame it has only three chapters, I would really like to see more of this. I mean, all the characters coming together for a beauty pageant? I'm not sure where you got the idea, but it's really funny so far. You've gathered almost everyone now. I'm curious to see what you're going to do with the pairings. Of course I love the PokeShipping and the ContestShipping :) I like IkariShipping, but we'll see how that goes. I really like how Paul is the prize. Not sure where the Waterflower sisters got that idea haha. I also like Cilan and Iris together, but since Bianca is coming too, I think you're going to pair him with her. Although I think Bianca and Barry would make a fun couple haha. And you mentioned Serena, who I'd usually couple with Clemont, but considering he's not here... Maybe Kenny? He's a sweet guy. Or Gary. Two problems solved with one pairing :P
Anyway, I know it's been really long since you've updated this, but it would be really awesome if you would continue this. Thank you very much for writing this, I hope to see this continued, and keep writing! ! !
Guest chapter 3 . 10/18/2017
OH MEW! Plzz update this . This is awesome(specially after entry of Serena heehee) anyways, its really so much fun to read update it man :( literally I m begging u . update soon.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/8/2016
And this one. Please finish this one too.
Mrs. Nose chapter 3 . 6/13/2016
DUDE, PLEASE CONTINUE THIS.
It's awesome, I laughed so, so much XDDDD.
Sapphire2112 chapter 3 . 4/27/2015
Pokeshipping! Please. Update. Soon.
vagadog2233 chapter 3 . 8/20/2014
Bitch, you gotta update.

This story makes me all giddy, probably because it's crack.
C'sMelody chapter 3 . 5/11/2014
I've laughed so much while reading this chapters! xD
I honestly hope you continue this, because I'm loving how this is progressing. I'm loving all of the character's vibes on this as well, seriously.
RoseQuartz1 chapter 3 . 4/2/2014
Yay! Iris is competing!
I think that though I've watch barely an episode of season 14 Iris is one of my favorite female characters, firstly, because her personality is really cute and awesome, and SECONDLY because she's the first BLACK traveling partner Ash has ever had! XD I just think that's so cool! XD
DistantStorm chapter 3 . 2/17/2014
This is hilarious. Why in the blue blazes haven't I read this earlier. This is just the comedic break I needed from my very melodramatic life. Thank you for sharing this.
thefierydeath chapter 3 . 2/16/2014
This is an awesome story! I got the Phineas and Ferb reference btw lol
videogamenerd101 chapter 2 . 2/16/2014
wow, so serena's here. i haven't watched any of the new kalos episodes (maybe i will, but the anime's slowly dying on me...), but i have a basic idea of serena's character and personality.

it's cool to see how everyone's preparing for the pageant. and paul's the prize? not too surprised that daisy, violet, and lily decided that the prize would be the opportunity to go on a date with one of the most famous bad boys in the pokemon world.

gary as a judge...? i can totally see that.

personally, i think you should go with ikarishipping. i know there's penguinshipping, but i hate kenny as a character and paul is the one who would actually not be so overprotective of dawn and actually help her grow as a person, unlike kenny. it's the one dawn pairing that makes most sense to me (in the anime, at least). of course, this is your story so it's up to you, so this is just a suggestion.
Ready to fly chapter 3 . 2/16/2014
Read all three chapters and I gotta say this is pretty funny and pretty awesome! Hmm I wonder who will win it in the end? My guess is Dawn because, hello Paul is the prize after all ! But I'm rooting for misty, heck Everypne knows ash is completely head over heels for the gal he is so going to vote for her XD lol I really like this story! The scenes with Drew and May are hilarious XD this is great
Jemzyboz chapter 2 . 2/16/2014
Ah damn, a plot-twist :P
videogamenerd101 chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
Interesting story idea. Misty's sisters setting up a beauty pageant? I can totally see that. xD
IvyLovesYou chapter 3 . 10/27/2013
Update? I really love your writing!
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