This is actually pretty awesome

Ooh, I like this! I've been writing about the soul mate bond between Jim and Spock as well. No sex between them in mine, but this is tastefully done. This is the first time I've read your story which was recommended to me by a mutual fan. I'm thinking about writing a pon farr story too, at some point. I'm into my 19th chapter of You Are My Heart. I love writing about these guys!

Great story!

This si so BEAUTIFUL! CRied while reading it, and yes I can totally see this happening. Write another one, you'tre REALLY GOOD :-)

This was beautiful.

Ummmm, not working for me. First I would never agree to bring second. Or for my T'hy'la to go and have sex with someone else right after me! I'd either kill him or his T'hy'la! That's just wrong. And stupid.

Loved that way of thinking for that threesome ;b

Very unique and interesting take on their relationship. Well-written! XD

Very interesting.