Dear drunkonkahlua (is that spelled right?),
I'm sorry to hear that you're not going to continue with the story, because it was really good. Nevertheless, it got further than Joss Stirling managed to, which was good because I prefer it later on. I understand what you're talking about, with it being forced, so I'm sorry you felt like that and discontinued this story ( ( ). I did try to write my own fanfiction, and I didn't share it, but like you it didn't feel as natural is it does when i write about other things. To be honest, when I write Finding Sky fanfiction I am constantly comparing myself to Joss Stirling (or Julia Golding). My only consolation is the fanfiction on this website, and the fact that I have met her when she came to my school, and she was a total... well you get the idea; she really wasn't very nice. You have kind of insipered me to start writing fanfiction again, along with some of the other authors on this website, so thank you for that. I was wondering whether you knew any other good authors of Finding Sky etc. fanfiction, because most of the people that I have seen do not write very well at all. I hope you stop feeling forced and write some more stories (preferably Finding Sky series).
Thanks again,
montycavalry
P.S. I hope this reaches you, as I'm not sure how it works.

Hey (idk what your name is)! I'm sorry if this is too late, but don't worry about your injections. I had them last year and they hurt quite a lot but only briefly. I hope you find them okay. I really like your stories, and right now I'm only on Chapter 8 but am really enjoying them so far. I don't know whether you finished the book or not, but I guess I'll find out as I read on. Anyway, you write really well and good luck on your injection!
-montycavalry

this is really good! please keep writing I NEED Yves's side of the story! :) :) :) :)

I forgive you but please write a new story

What is your problem with finishing stories

:D

hey it flows perfectly with the story keep going with it!

they are american so put mom

love first chapter

heya can you plz make one in zed pov

can you please stop putting your little comments in bold in the middle? as your story flows really well but the little questions is making it hard to read.

Jeez, I do love this story hun, you should definitely continue with it. :D xxxxx

Plz I don't think its forced...plz continue writing

This isnt a review more like a comment. I was in the EXACT position as u not so long ago!

Well I think mom as he was brought up in the us!