I'm a little late to this story, but I read it in it's entirety over the past couple of days and, I must say, this is very well written and it's a shame it isn't finished. The journal aspect is a great idea and the description of Justice taking over is riveting. Keep up the great work in all of your writing endeavors!

Yay an update! So glad to get to read more of this awesome story! Love how he burned all the papers even knowing and stating that it didn't really change anything. Keep up the awesome work!

Very nice. I liked the little moment of happiness here though I fear for what's coming...don't stop please! I love this so much

When do we get the next chapter, damn you? :)

Wow! Chilling ending to this chapter, it is amazing. Great job as always. I hope for more soon.

Crazy good! That was amazing! I love it and hope for more soon.

Oh please please please don't make me wait so long! I adore this story!

Awww, I lurve you and this fic so much! Glad we can give you renewed energy to keep writing. Great chapter...can't wait for the next one! :)

Wow the ending of this one was very intense. I love it! Amazing job as always and i hope for more soon.

Wow! I love the memoir style you're approaching this with! I think it's a good artistic decision to have Justice actively writing in the Journal as well. It sends home this idea of how tentative Anders' grip really is. I also liked a different thing, a few chapters ago: the first time the audience was confronted with Justice, there was no bolding of text or separators. It was a very, very subtle flip of pronouns you were using. It was chilling, really. As Anders slowly loses his battle with Justice, maybe you could reflect that with an increasingly unobtrusive bending of voice? I live how Justice has his own very clear voice, style, and diction that sets him apart from Anders. I appre Kate being able to walk this struggle through Anders' eyes. Very often, we're presented with Anders' conflict as seen by Hawke, but that does so little to encourage the audience to relate with the mage. You've done a fantastic job at capturing Anders' specific voice, and I don't know if you intended this, but (if you didn't intend it to work this way, then props on the Authorial Intuition) even the descriptions, settings, and subtext for scenes come out in Anders' voice. I know that's a necessity for a first person piece... but I have seen a great many who they for such a thing, forget the importance of diction in voice, and end up with a botched piece they can't see the week point in. None of that is YOUR work, but I offer that because I really think you've done a masterful work in flaunting your command of good Writing Technique and your understanding of developing character with first person. I mean... there's a reason all my work is in third.

love it! Please continue!