Still as hot as I remember! So good. Now I'm curious about the ominous subplot going on... the future is as fluid as a river so it's a good guess that something bad is in the horizon for these two.

Poor Zee she passed out...that was a most funny side effect ever...she's gonna beg for more threesomes with B and Di.

This whole serie is really amazing. Wonderful Job

Such a WONDERful story! That last chapter...so hot!

Great stories my dude, I still can't believe I have like 4 other stories left to read from you.

That was amazing! I'm seriously reading every story you have here since cell they tie together. Keep it up! I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!

Hello, how are you? Hope you are well.
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I've read your stories once before and just restarted I think you've done such amazing work specially in Hearts but I will review that later. I like your style and how you gave a twist to all the characters, this part is so steamy and magical and full of moments that crack me up,and your writing has flow that doesn't make you wanna hang your head against the wall but actually keep own. It's better than canon Also I love you appreciation of Latin culture. I'm Brazilian so nice to see Beatriz, she does sound a little Hispanic but it's way better than what the comics do, I'm still going to see a character that genuinely looks Brazilian. That being said I adore your love and respect of Latin culture, I dated someone from Equator and have friends from Colombia and Porto Rico, and they all love their Reggaeton. Great work with the symbolisme and all the subtext I'm sure some of them sneaked past me but you have a way of working the subtleties. I'm not going to break this down chapter by chapter but amazing work. People keep figuring Bruce out XD.

I think it's great all the time and effort you put into this, so thank you so very much for sharing this with us. You seem like a very sensitive person, an admirable one and that shows at every touch and word in this story. Also great mood setting. Loved the soundtrack.

Again thank you. Keep up being this luminous thing you are.

Ps: chapter one Beatriz would say “vazia”, vazio is masculine the machine is fe minine in Portuguese.(yes it's crazy I know) Also saying “senhorita” makes her sound old, Brazilians are not big on using formalities even with people higher in hierarchy(unlike french for instance), but if she must it would be just “Senhora” even with Diana being young. “Senhorita” it's something someone with more than 70 would say to a young girl. :)

Take care.

DAMN WONDERFUL! This chapter put me in the mood. WOW! You have me full of desire. You did beautifully thats how I would interpret Bruce and Diana feeling. They waited enough. You need write more you have caught their true personas.

WOW! your magnificent! The Amor around those two is unimaginable! Keep going!

*FAINTS* You seriously knocked me dead with this one especially the last chap! *fans self*
That was so hot and so amazing and yet so sweet! You do such an awesome job of intertwining everything together and making it all so magical!

*runs to read the next one*

I loved the interaction between the 4 in this chapter. Very sweet.

wow sweet go Aphrodite

awww great work

oh man what going to happen

oh wicked awsome