| Reviews for A Rather Serious Design Flaw |
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darkchocol8807 chapter 1 . 3/11/2014 Hot! Love this! More! DarkC |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2013 H O T |
xxKhaleesixx chapter 1 . 10/11/2012 Loved it! |
CharlotteBlackwood chapter 1 . 10/9/2012 BEAUTIFULLY written. At first I was annoyed by the build-up because there was so much of it, but by the time i got to the end I decided I liked it. It made it seem like more than just a smutty story, but what a lovely smutty story it was. :D -C |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2012 wow, nice |
voodooqueen126 chapter 1 . 10/1/2012 hot but uncomfortable. |
CleganesGirl chapter 1 . 9/28/2012 The fighting scene with the wights is extremely well done. Even the characterisation of the spearwife was perfectly executed. The smut, of course, was great, but I'm glad this wasn't centered entirely on sex. It had a lot of lovely little details, like the guard who seemed a little smitten with the spearwife and her cold dismissal of him. I really enjoyed this, and my only gripe would be that it isn't longer, but that's just me being greedy. :) Well done. |
Lauren chapter 1 . 9/28/2012 omg I am totally speechless... is was so hawwwttt hawwt hawtttt! i also had to google most of the parts of armour mentioned which was fun lolololol I love you for writing this! PLEASE write more, I kid you not, this was absolutely brilliant! |
Ordgar chapter 1 . 9/28/2012 Very steamy, very well written, the vague context doesn't matter. You could sort that out if you do a sequel or two. I particularly liked your use of Westerosi names for the minor characters in this story; if they're originally yours that's impressive, if their GRRM's that's good accuracy. Well done! |
Littlefeatherofhope chapter 1 . 9/27/2012 I love this so much-it's got everything-smut, fighting, wights, dragonglass! It's Sansan yummy goodness, thank you so much for your fic :) You could totally keep this going if you wanted, *hint* but if not it's an instant favorite of mine. |