I love this story! The relationships and action and supernatural creativity is great!

This is a great story so far! I can already tell this is going to be good. But I really think you should pay attention to your grammar. Maybe you're writing too fast or just don't know but some parts just aren't written well and you used the wrong words sometimes. I don't know.

I absolutely love this story! It's adorable and full of action too. If the relationship between Stiles, Damien, and Derek does become a three-way I think that would be completely awesome! I can't wait to read the next installment and please continue to write fantastically!;)

OK I seriously love this story. It has to be one of the best one I have ever head and the chapters are so deliciously long. One thing though and I hope you don't take this the wrong way but I don't really like the way the relationship between Derek, Stiles and Damien is doing. Maybe because Im a die hard Sterek fan they should always be together but anyways, you are an amazing writer and Im still going to read this no matter the it the relationship goes. Hopefully you update soon because that is a big cliffhanger and Im hoping it is what I think it is, but I rather not say anything and find out. Take Care

omw!

for some reason i hope stiles ends up with damien or both of them! cos even though im a massive sterek fan, derek always gets what he wants and damien has more to loose! This is really good ! ;)

i love it when stiles's up to something...

soooo can't wait to read stiles bout reaction towards mila...

I freaking love this fic. Cant wait until the next update and keep up wit the amazing work. I was so worth the wait for the update. Take Care and thanks for sharing such an amazing story.

Awesome!

Merry Christmas!

Ok, great chapter! So much is happening, I can't wait for the next installment!

Just a comment on your writing style - the story is FABULOUS, absolutely wonderful, but sometimes it feels like you're so excited to get the story down, you don't remember to fill out your paragraphs properly, so it's a bit of a choppy read, full of all this flat out information, but no meat on the bones, so to speak? Perhaps try reading your work a few more times before publishing, slowly, because at the moment it's such a racing pace. Which is great and all, but perhaps it's something you could think about.

All the best with your writing! xxx

Ok wow, this was a very intense chapter! You've explained it all well though so I totally know/understand what's going on, excellent excellent...

SQUEEEE the spirit of the forest?! are you kidding me?! that's so freaking awesome!

Oh my god THIS CHAPTER YOU ARE KILLING ME ugh ok ok I'm actually in tears far out this is so good

Wow, the ending to this chapter is so badass!
Once again, I need to tell you how much I love Damien and this story, I have no idea what's about to come next, it's not predicable at all and that's so good! I just want to keep reading and reading and reading until everything is revealed to me! You've got an amazing imagination! xx