| Reviews for Rambles and Ambles A Sasuke & Naruko Oneshot Series |
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HEART BEATZ 24'7 chapter 4 . 7/26 So sweet! |
HEART BEATZ 24'7 chapter 3 . 7/26 Hilarious! |
HEART BEATZ 24'7 chapter 1 . 7/26 So adorable! |
TroublesomeFox21 chapter 1 . 12/17/2016 Ok usually read the whole story section thing but the frogs were sooooo cute! I loved how naruko didn't believe that he wasn't the frog. Really cute |
j chapter 4 . 11/5/2014 You should make that a full story. the one with the omurice! |
Trainofthought chapter 4 . 10/24/2014 So errr fix engine light and coitus interruptus... Been watching the Big Bang theory? Lol. |
PN15 chapter 4 . 10/23/2014 Thanks for updating and I wanted to ask if you could possibly develop chapter two into and story because I would love to read more. If not that's totally fine I love the new chapter xx |
em chapter 4 . 10/22/2014 this was great. thank you for sharing, i hope you get over your writers block and write more :) |
nicolehaught chapter 4 . 10/22/2014 Ok *grabs gun and shoots you* Excuse me Nat, you had me waiting and when I finally gave up, you decided to update. Well... that's pretty good actually... stop making me hurt. Update soon. Definition of Soon- in or after a short time. Lol, ILuvYouHaters out. |
Guest chapter 3 . 3/24/2014 Yep cobdoms are scaryyyyyyyy |
Guest chapter 3 . 10/6/2013 Fluff after the intensity of the 2nd chapter! I really liked the 2nd oneshot, incidentally. It made us all uncomfortable in a good way because Sasuke and Naruto are most likely our favorite couple, so we want them together (not like Naruto's relationship with Itachi was made to sound like it was all that great in this story anyway), but they are BOTH behaving SO despicably... It's hard to see our heroes as heroes in that one and I really like that. As for the third onseshot, I liked the realism of it. I hate stories about first time teen sex where they act like pornstars. The awkwardness and embarrassment that so many people experience is always left out. (In fact, I would argue that awkwardness and embarrassment is much more the normal experience than having everything go perfectly.) So having them get embarrassed when buying the condoms and deciding to hold off for a while was just right, in my opinion. |
Mr.Heller chapter 3 . 10/4/2013 Fun shot, gives me some chuckles, thanks for it, good lick! |
Nyla Stilez chapter 2 . 8/25/2013 This was so good! |
ChaosKnight005 chapter 2 . 5/23/2013 nice |
ChordOverstreetFan chapter 2 . 4/15/2013 I can't say I like this. I can tolerate cheating when it's either: a) a one-time thing, or b) the one cheating is badly treated. In this oneshot, it feels like she was stolen from Itachi more than anything. |