Hey, are you going to continue this? Because this is a fun read and i am sill hoping for an update.

God help those Valkyria tanks if they cross paths with a T-100 Ogre.

Are you done or will you continue?

Updated 2013? THERE'S STILL HOPE!

I'm begging you. Please continue this awesome crossover. I especially want Isara to not only live through this but also get into a jet.

Wait a second... Updated: Mar 28, 2013?

There's still hope!

I wish you update soon.

BTW, something struck me, since the two worlds has some differences when it came to Science and culture, you should put a commitee on how to translate Earth stuffs to Europan stuff. Well first is the Ragnite, its properties needs to be studied well, since it can be use as fuel, medicine and materials for other stuffs. Another reason is the Medical field, in this chapter, there is a friction. Learning the procedures should do fine. Another is the understanding/knowledge. Clancy Earth has learned a lot that they can make Lasers, Powerful Computers and etc. while Europa doesn't. The EF, since they are from a scientific research base alllows them to leap tech much easier, not to mention the industrial capabilities of such a large country.

Another thing that should be noted is modern tank engine is designed to guzzle anything that is flammable, including booze. Then again, its Ragnite so it might run differently unless Ragnite fuel runs like our gasoline. I hope that in the next few chapters, the engineers will realize that Ragnite can run on EndWar universe's tanks.

Though I hope you update soon. More power to you and your story.

Been awhile but it looks like you been refining the story better then the last.

So far the JSF just had to become temporary mercenaries and are just offering their combat services to Gallia for a place to stay. Bet they be surprise when the SGB and EFEC force are their too and they would likely priories their resources on them before they make any long terms damages to the world. As for Allen, Looks like he going to have problems. Being the NUB for having his unit kill from a ambush and knowing Largo and Rosie dislike of rookie officer and one who got his unit kill its going to be awhile before he get any respect from these two. Let hope Welkin, Alicia, and Isara will give him the chance to show what he can do with Squad 7 and maybe he prove himself he a capable officer.

For the complains for my own opinion is that you are reusing a lot of things from your old story. I not saying it a bad thing, but you can improve the story by not just expand on the old but add new things to it. You could just add other different people perspectives. one is Irene Ellet, she would likely try to head straight to Fort Amatriain to interview and get the story on the JSF is something worth its weight in gold in it own right.

Other then some minor error on writing, so far it coming in well.

Took you long enough.

Wouldn't added something along the lines:

"American generals are known to care for their men and check on them directly," Blaise explained, "It's a tradition of sorts, unofficial, but a part of our military heritage to the dark days when we were fighting for our nation's independence and indeed, it's very birth."

Figure that would have made a number of officers, such as Damon squirm like worms just before you put'em on the hook and go after the big one!

I hope this isn't asking for too much, but would it be possible for the fighters/fighter-bombers to play a bigger role in battles in this rewrite than in the original fic? who knows, maybe converting ragnite into jet-usable fuel won't be that hard of a challenge for the engineers...

A good chapter. The only oversight I could see in this chapter is why the Gallians didn't reacted when they saw the Super Hornets? The Super Hornets may be fast but they still should be able to see it especially when it does it turns. Also, isn't the JSF using the A-20 instead of the F/A-18?

Anyways, keep up the good work. I want to see the Gallian government's reaction when they see the level of training the JSF have. After all, the JSF is made up of soldiers from various US special forces units. Considering the JSF like any other army by the Gallian HQ is a big mistake. They're an elite combat unit NOT a conventional combat unit. Kind of makes me wonder how will the Gallian army soldiers react under the training that they will get if the JSF agreed to train them. Oh yeah, the JSF brought along with them some cool pieces of technology so I wonder how will National Arsenal react to that.

Update ASAP.

Again a good chapter on the your new rewrite.

It would of been funny too see Damon actually have a heart attack or stroke, it would have been karma for all the stupid decisions he made in his career. anyway, so far General Blaise and the JSF finally meet the Gallian General staff and is making negotiation for sanctuary for his task force to repel the empire. I'm betting that the government of Gallia and prime minster Borg are going to flip out to hear a fully armed JSF task force with advance weapons, equipment, and vehicles are on the west coast of Gallia.

As for the EFEC Its look like they will signed a agreement with the Atlantic Federation to stop the empire from defeating them for shelter, looks like the empire conquest is going to stop dead in its tracks.

Other then several grammer mistakes, and repeat words I really want to see the reaction on the government, Borg, and Cordelia when the General staff drops the bomb on them.

My God, what took you so long? I've been itching for your update for almost two months.

Anyway, its a good rewrite. Good thing you were able to write the Euros who is stucked there in Europa as well as the Yanks and the Russians. Anyway, for the organisation i think only designated units gets to work closely with the EndWar counterparts especially with the advisers. Though I would like an American/European/Russian unit showing how they fight and resulting in a curbstomp battle on whoever is in their receiving end.

BTW, please post another chapter before the year ends

This revision is allot smoother and a little better than the original story.

Since this is a remake, I wonder if you will let the Gallians reverse engineer all of the JSF's weaponry like the rifles used by the Ghost and even the sentry drone. Still, I wonder if this rewritten fanfic will be a lot different from the first one. It seems to be just the same thing with some words as an exception.