Reviews for Beneath a Shattered Sky
Guest chapter 69 . 7/9
i stg if u don’t release a book (literally with any plot) by the end of the decade i will be a bit mad. YOU ARE SUCH A GREAT WRITER. the creativity you possess is amazing and you are one of the few writers who manages to keep the characters in character while still making them grow. ugh the way you write the relationships are immaculate. i could feel the love radiating through the screen. i usually shy away from fantasy’s but i already reread this one at least 3 times and i have plans to reread it many times again. this and all of your stories are great. if you need an idea i have a simple one that is related to your theme of the one difference. you could write what would’ve happened if hyde had let jackie in to meet his mom on prom night. you are one of the few writers whose stories i can reread and still enjoy them the same as i did the first time i read them. you also show what love really is. so many stories make it seem like jackie and hyde have only a superficial attraction. but you make it so my heart clenches every time a moment happens between them and so i literally feel the emotions the characters are having in the story. ugh i cannot stress enough how great this and everything else written by you is. thank you thank you thank you! :)
Guest chapter 69 . 6/7
i swear you write the best stories. i’ve read all of them but i put this one off because it was a fantasy, which is a genre i usually don’t like very much, but i loved this story. you wrote the characters so well and the plot was great. i loved jackie and hyde and i loved how they stuck together through and through and totally went against all odds. i loved kelso and brooke too, i always wished they would end up together. thank you so much for writing all these amazing stories. they really brighten my days. nicey-nice! :)
shortie990 chapter 69 . 5/8
You are a master writer and storyteller. I just love this story and how you gave each member of the gang a happily ever after! Thank you!
RedKittyKat chapter 69 . 12/19/2018
I loved this story and it's first installment. I've read this once before but recently watched the Tenth Kingdom and understood this entire series a lot more when I read it a second time. This book however that you created not only flowed organically but it really felt like the same universe the first one took place in. This is one of those books that i wished would go on forever, and maybe someday you can do a one shot for ten or so years later. Either way, I felt satisfied at the end and was so happy that everyone found peace.

Thank you for bringing to life to such a beautiful story.
107derwent chapter 69 . 9/12/2018
Whyyyy? Why is it over! I'm an orphan now! I truly didnt want this story to end, but at the same time I wanted to know how everything would turn out. An amaaaaazing novel, L! I just cant wait for more from you, seriously!

And i love that HJ's song is The rain song! Is one of my favorites, so beautiful and with so much love in it. 'Speak to me only with your eyes' always reminds me of everyone who have been in love for so long that they dont even have to actually say words to get their partner, and they both experienced that in this story.

Thank you soooo much for sharing this story with the fandom! It was a long and crazy journey!
107derwent chapter 66 . 9/10/2018
I'm IN LOVE with this chapter! I love crazy non-reality stuff. This place where they are is so weird and dry and lonely - perfect for finding yourself all over again. And it's interesting that Hyde doesnt remember about jackie, but he's the only thing in her mind at the same time. I wonder if anyone is going to break the diamond in the outside world so there will be an shattered sky. Ooooor, they will break it from the inside when they finally find each other again! Ayyyyyy! I dont know what i'm gonna do when this story is over...
107derwent chapter 60 . 9/2/2018
Hyde's flashbacks are turning weirder by the second. Edna is a real freak in this story and she makes me flinch everytime she shows up. Poor Hyde! And ayyyyy, Kelso found a mirror! Is it the travelling mirror? Aaaaaah! I wonder if he's gonna be lured to leave the Nine Kingdoms in a time like this.
107derwent chapter 59 . 9/1/2018
Ok, too much going on here and i'm so excited! What was this chapter? I was terrified on the Bernice's tomb scene. The hell! So scary! So Hyde was right all along about the curse. Damn! How are they ever gonna break it now that they know it's a dead woman's curse? It's gotta be magiiiiic!

And now i'm thinking again about that lit window at one of the towers when they first arrived at QRRH kingdom. Maybe there is where the mirror is, if it IS with Penny indeed. And i happen to think it's the same tower they were right now. And maybe that's why the stairs ended halfway. There must be a secret passage somewhere. Ayyy, you know how i like to especulate!

This is such an amazing story!
107derwent chapter 55 . 8/27/2018
I'm almost sure now that Penny is also possesed by someone else. She didnt seem like herself when she was with Kelso - more like that people on the ice kingdom - and she told Eric "give US a hug" qhen they were at the forest. I hadnt understood why she said that, but now... ay, i love all the misteries in this story!
107derwent chapter 53 . 8/26/2018
I honestly love Eric in these two stories. It's really interesting that he's such an important figure in the nine kindoms in so many ways. I love that he keeps finding out more about himself and how great he can be.
107derwent chapter 47 . 8/19/2018
Yeeeeees! She's free! Poor thing! She must've been so scared. I hope the curse doesnt turn Steven into something bad, though. I'm so nervous of what is to come!
107derwent chapter 45 . 8/16/2018
This is one of the most painful things i've ever read. God dammit! I dread the day Jackie will lose her touch and be pratically gone forever. This was way too sad to experience, but it was amazing writing. Seriously, i dont have much words, cause i'm still astonished by this chapter. A wonderful WONDERFUL work!

Ps: i'm pretty sure penny has something to do qith Gretel's murder. Ayyyy, the Forman kids are way too much trouble heheh
107derwent chapter 41 . 8/12/2018
OMG! OMG! OMG! This is probably one of the most intense chapters of the entire story so far! Cant even say how frightened i was from the beginning to the end hahaha i do hope hyde is not dead, and if he is, there's gotta be some magic to wake him up. A true love's kiss? Damn! Please dont kill him hahahahha
107derwent chapter 40 . 8/9/2018
Reviewing the last two chapters :) i'm soooo glad the truth about eric'a family finally came out! I knew there was something to do with wolfs from the beginning with all his new strange behavior and how stronger he was. But it didnt occur to me that his grandmother would be QRRH! And Penny being the current queen! Wow! Everything just fits together. The wolf she brought to the wedsing and everything. Still wants to know more about Laurie and what will happen - if she'd ever come back or not.

I feel bad for Donna. She's hurt, but at the same time, eric's got too much to deal right now qith these new discoveries. I hope he gets to open up more to her soon. They deserve happiness! I only thought it was weird her pecking Hyde right in front of a sleeping Jackie. No no, woman! Hahha

And i think i havent said that yet in this story, but CONGRATS for writing Jackie in here. Describing scenes with a mute, blind and now deaf character is no easy job, but it's been going great. Her connection to steven it's beyond the primary senses and i guess that's what they need to realize how much they love each other and what really matters. You're doing a great job here.
107derwent chapter 38 . 7/31/2018
Big Rhonda around here is reeeeally a surprise, and a nice one! I love how she got the troll nation's attention and love and I sense she'll be a key element to all kingdoms peace - because i root for her and Fez! Hahaha they should've been together on the show.
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