thanks for the awesome plotthough i wish there was another epilogue where there's a happy ending...
i feel bad about Elizabeth and Break's tragic story.

Wait... is it over?! I hope not, cus' I want a next chapter! This is too good!

there's something wrong here.. plz fix it. thx!

Heeeyyyy would you please update soon I would like to know what happens to break and sharon!

Ps: Love your story!

I love this is story so much. But I can't read the other 2 chapter. I wonder what they were.

Can you please write and post more chapters?

Your story is really good! Please update soon!

And I really want a breakxlizzy ending

Hmmm... So far I guess you can work with the flow of your story... There were a few grammatical errors but it's alright (_) Also, don't forget to watch your punctuation (_)

Elizabeth's seemed to have multiple personality. It really intrigues me how her moods can change really fast but I guess it's part of her character...
Break's personality is a bit off (I'm just basing from the manga). He's the kind of guy who tends to pull the strings and just watch so he's sometimes creepy for me. Drag the gentleman side and mischievous side together.
Same with Sharon. The bad attitude doesn't suit a lady raised by Sheryl and Sherry Rainsworth you know. I guess she's not someone who will rudely talk back and show a bad attitude in public but I think she can pull off a sarcastic remark in a ladylike way. Sharon always strikes me to be the kind of person who keeps her problems to herself (my reference is the conversation between her and Sheryl in the manga)
And take Reim into consideration. He and Break are close and he can see through Break.

That's all.
Remember my fluff request.
BreakXSharon until the end (o)

Exiting like it , yes poor Break chose between Sharon and Elizabeth xD

I like both , but because of the manga and some other thibgs i most say i hope for BreakxSharon

I read 3 chapters. I see plenty of Grammar, Punctuation, and Capitalization errors. Try to fix those. However, so far I love the story.

So Elizabeth is the host of the core of the abyss ? Very interesting :D , then she is quite powerful . Well , the chapter is very nice but there's something that bothers me : Sharon's reaction when she sees Break & Elizabeth .

I hope she becomes less bitchy to Lizzie because i just feel like i hate Sharon in there :P .

PS : Love your fanfic , keep up with your nice work .

huhu... pleaseeeeee... fluff... just one... Sharon and Break... pretty please *soul leaves the body*

Sharon and Break until the end!

tehehehehe jealous Sharon :) & O.o - ( I feel sorry for break getting into this situation - )

Hugs, hugs, hugs, hugs. I just find the pairing SharonxBreak to be so weird ;A; I mean Sharon looks at Break as a brother! Or something like that..I think...and this was short, but enough to make me grind my teeth for more.
Get your imagination engines to work! D: -cheers- Also, who told you where the light switch was? _
Good day, my lady!