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Mean is My Middle Name chapter 9 . 1/27/2013 Ellie! She is so cute. Your writing is still amazing. I can't wait to see what is to happen with the offers! Seychelles and Rinzen is so bad-ass! It makes me wonder how the heck Lukas managed to get friends like them... |
Storm229 chapter 9 . 1/23/2013 Yay! An update :) I loved this chapter, as per usual and the last line was a very effective ending :D I hope to see a next chapter soon! |
MintCookieMonsterr chapter 9 . 1/23/2013 Oh my... Hehe, Kole is horrible at making friends... Anyway,...Don't mind me and all, but I like Seychelles, Lukas, and Rinzen friendship! They seem like great friends! Ohoho...does Ellie have a crush? This chapter was amazing! Thanks for posting! |
Alexandra989 chapter 9 . 1/23/2013 Interesting! Keep up the awesome work! |
Meteorthunder3 chapter 9 . 1/23/2013 Fuahh, I didn't think that you would make Heath go berserk so early. Still I was worried about that aspect and you managed to make it a nice read so congratulations! Though now i'm wondering how much trouble he will be in for that incident. |
Scene'Killer'8D chapter 8 . 11/26/2012 Uwaa! They are all so adorable! But this chapter really got me thinking about... Who I ship in this story! Now I just got into it, my sister having submitted and character, and I already love everybody. Now to my ships... MY ship logic is simple, We have the awkward couple, the adorable couple, the who-wears-the-pants couple, the happy couple, and the problem couple. I totally ship Mars and Heath. So cute, with him with her videogame, and her being all spazzy when he talks. So cute! They would be the awkward couple! I totally ship Kole and Ellie. Why? EVEN though they have never talked, they both had a rough childhood and I think Kole could break her out of her mute like state...something like that. They would be the adorable couple! I gotta say it...I truly do...Rinzen and Lukas! Eh?! Don't turn away or laugh, I ship them because Rinzen would totally be all awkward and reclutent and blunt while Lukas would be trying to make a move and get his hand bitten off by one of Rinzen's plants when he visited her in the garden. Despite their humorous relationship, they would be the problem couple. I think with Rinzen being not a social person would make it hard for them. I totally ship Aurea and Chiaro, Aurea, in my mind, would totally do some mischeivous stuff to Chiaro while he didn't know, like taking pictures of him and selling them. I dont know, I guess happy people give off the vibe to me. I would totally put them as the who-wears-thes-pants couple. Now last but not least...Claire and Dom...There is one main reason...and that's because Claire and Ellie are alike, and Dom and Kole are best buds. There are still other things like Dom being there for Claire, and him being the ultimate awesome boyfriend...*eyes sparkle*...ahem* Wipes drool*. Yeah...Claire and him would be the happy/perfect couple... I really like your story, and hope to read more! Hope you had a great Thanksgiving! For a extra, I would totally ship Haya and Seychelle if Haya wasn't into Lukas... |
dinosaywhat99 chapter 8 . 11/17/2012 A Tumblr? Sounds awesome! I have one so I would totally ask questions and stuff like that! To the chapter... I really enjoyed it! I also liked Seychelle and Lukas's sorta kinda friendship! I would throw Rinzen in there too! Hehe, Marlene seems to like two guys, but the question that lies ahead is... Who will she choose? |
Alexandra989 chapter 8 . 11/16/2012 I really love the way you write! And each chapter is better than the previous one (I think). How can you call yourself horrible? Update soon! If you can. ;-) Tumblr? Not so sure if many of your readers are on that. |
Assassinated Silence chapter 8 . 11/16/2012 Wait...Dominique has red hair?... . Well, shows how much I pay attention... Kat! Yay! I hope no cat fights break lose during the meeting... MarLena, get some! We all know you want to! Just like us, but you have more of a chance! GET SOME! *ahem* Great chapter! I enjoyed it very much! |
MintCookieMonsterr chapter 8 . 11/16/2012 Yay! Another chapter! :3 Ohoohoh, they all get to meet eachother already! Wow, Katrina and Xander know how to flaunt their stuff, if you know what I mean. *nudge* *nudge* *wink* *wink* Kole, you people deprived man, make some other friends beside Dom! I don't mind it, but other people are going to suspect stuff! *looks around suspiciously* Yeah, I saw that comment... Anyway, Mars seems to have the hots for TWO guys, now that's the way to go girl! I loved the chapter! |
Cursed Aesahaettr chapter 8 . 11/16/2012 DearJesusIloveyouforalletern itythischapterwasabsolutelye ffingamazingomgholyshi- *slapped back to Earth* 8D It makes me all giggly inside to see Chi-sama described that way, but I can't let it get to my head because he isn't a real character and there's no way I'll be able to date him. . In your own words: "And her dreams were summarily crushed. Damn." Oh but this chapter... I honestly can't believe Aurea made it, mostly because I didn't see anyone else vote for her. But I love you for it, because now everything will be as clusterfucked as I'd hoped, with their "relationship" as complicated as it is and adding in other people. How many people might start crushing on Chiaro, I wonder... O-O Not to jinx things, but that would be very dramatic... Bravo for getting this out. I think it's some magic that everytime I think about this story a new chapter comes out that day or sometime soon. XD Are you psychic? |
Paperman0 chapter 8 . 11/16/2012 It was almost time for an update:) good work. I was wondering: will Qirin the dragon be part of the cast? and are you going to use all of them in the reality show? |
Mean is My Middle Name chapter 8 . 11/16/2012 Ohohooho...is this a crush I see? Mars, you dirty girl. I got a lot of humor from this chapter. Especially when Rinzen crushed Mars's dreaming. I really liked Lukas and Seychelles arrival, with him being all friendly. It's okay if you were gone for so long, I was patient:) |
Meteorthunder3 chapter 8 . 11/15/2012 Good to see your back! :D And is it just me or is there something going on between Heath and Mars . hmmmmmmmm.. Anyways, another well written chapter, and finally got around to introducing the cast. |
Paperman0 chapter 7 . 10/19/2012 Nice charter, really. And having slow updates is not a problem at all. I looked at the review and I’m glad to see that Dom is so much liked. I really like his relationship with Kole. They practically are a couple by now. Reguarding the participants in the reality: From Red Fountain: Dom and Kole (They are practically a couple by now), Seychelles and Xander. From Alfea: Charlotte, Clair, Rinzen and Aurea I almost died of laughter reading Golden Chariot's yaoi comment |