| Reviews for On the Fields of Freedoms Edge |
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First Dragon chapter 12 . 10/11/2018 This was wonderful! Although the beginning was rather rough because for me the concept of a forced interface was terribly... wrong, especially with Optimus. But I took it to continue with the story and at the end it was a a journey worth it. I like the process on the island when Megatron had time and came to a kind of peace, even when it was forced... and the scene with the seals... adoreable! And later, the bonding... well, it seems to be a mending of the former wrongs and it started a lot of feelings, so Megatron has to face reality. The only wish I had was for the ending: I would have liked to read a bit more of the development of the whole relationship (MegOP!), so...I hope you will find the time for the epilog one day or, perhaps, a continueing... ;-) Thank you for this story so far! |
Avaya chapter 12 . 1/18/2016 This was so beautiful. And funny. I LOVED IT!...But where is the Epilogue?! :O |
Avaya chapter 9 . 1/18/2016 LOL. I love the AN in this chapter. Bahahaha. Good story as always even though this is my first review. Very beautiful. |
Guest chapter 12 . 12/23/2015 This was an awesome story. Also the bots and cons reactions to the announcement? I was laughing the who time. "So who is the girl?" "Im guessing Megatron is the proud mommy?" "Yes i am. Got a problem with that" "Er, no" |
Guest chapter 10 . 12/23/2015 I dont even wanna know why Breakdown is having a break down and why Knock Out is knocked out on the floor... |
Guest chapter 12 . 11/7/2015 Can't wait for the epilogue! this was a great story and I hop you'll write more. This one author wrote short stories of events that happened after and during the main story. It would be cool to read about Megatron and Orion's time on the island and some trials getting the Autobots and Desepticons paired up. |
PrimesSPARROW chapter 12 . 10/22/2015 This was an awesome story so far |
BlueStar19 chapter 12 . 11/15/2014 Ok when I was reading this, it made me cry that Megatron's creation wanted him back and then Megatron went on a rampage. Can't wait to read the epilogue. |
Master Of Tricks chapter 12 . 10/27/2014 Yup. It was a fun ride. I love this fic to pieces. I thank you for this. Like, seriously. 3 |
Firewolves16 chapter 12 . 10/27/2014 I Bet he'll be a triple changer. I bet he's adorable. |
eltigre221 chapter 12 . 10/26/2014 dawww I loved the ending, sweet, short, but very nicely done, and good jokes in there about Perceptor's original alt mode and Megatron's original alt from the 80s cartoon :) well until the epilogue, later and have fun writing :) |
efdsdfsa chapter 12 . 10/26/2014 Beautiful chapter. I love this. Nice journey youve made with this. |
libbyluvs chapter 12 . 10/26/2014 Uh-freaking-mazing! ...wows. |
eltigre221 chapter 11 . 10/18/2014 dawww I loved the ending of this chapter, so sweet the bonding between Optimus and Megatron :) awesome chapter, and until more, later and have fun writing :) |
Lexx chapter 1 . 10/17/2014 Oh and in case anyone was wondering.. That squeal several octaves above my normal pitch at noticing chapter 11.. That wasn't me. Nope. No way. Uhuh. Maybe. ;) |