I did feel that it was a bit rushed, but otherwise it was a great ending. I also think that the whole Joshua being Neku's friend theory was possible x3 I do like how you put it in here, and how they finally made up. Neku sort-of making up with his dad, too, was sweet.

Thanks for the great read!

Oh god, I hope you aren't planning on making the father like, a cheater that cares nore about one family than Neku's. Anything but that. Maybe someone caring and kind. But anyways, I hope the next chapter cones out soon!

An update! :) Go Joshua for removing the bug, though he still isn't forgiven (although you can't really blame Neku). Lol at Sho with no plan thereee x3 But I wonder who's the boy...Great chapter!

Nice story so far. I'm pretty keen on seeing how you explain that last paragraph too

I'm really glad that you updated thisDDD I also really like you mentioning his old friend that died, that was a really great touch I really hope something will come out of it because that was something in the game that I really wanted to see *sigh* I love this chapter, please update soon D

mnnn sounds pretty interesting.

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( ・・）ドキ
oノ つ） ドキ
( ( ・・）ワク
oノ つ） ワク
( ( ・・）ニヤ
（ ニヤ
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Konishi - can't she just stay erased?! XD And I love how Neku saw Mr. Mew, so Konishi's plan to demoralise him backfired. Ooh Neku's memory...Looking forward to more!

this is too awesome for words... please update soon DDD

Sounds pretty interesting so far! Only two corrections: Japan's emergacy number is 110 not 911. Also, it's Wildkat. Anyways, keep it up!

A world between the RG and UG, eh? I'm pretty pumped about the way this is going!

It's spelt as 'coma' ;
Skipping over that - woah. Stuck in another universe. Crap, I hope Neku'll be okay. It wasn't a fast-paced chapter but I liked reading it :) And the cliffhanger was nicely done...it works. I wanna know what happens nexttt x3

-waits patiently for next update-

Keep writing!
-Dina

Wow This is a great story Keep it up!

Hmm there was some positives and negatives in this so far. Such as Rhyme having grown her hair longer even though it's only been one week. And the fact that Joshua should be super-powerful and able to just wipe out a rebellion.

If we just ignore that fact and some errors in grammar - I do love the conversation you put between the group. It's so like Beat to call Shiki four-eyes without knowing it's her. And Neku referenced as Cloud - emos stick together, eh?

But overall I liked it! Besides, you're writing to improve.

Keep on writing!

-Dina

nice intro and great characterizations! keep it up, i wanna see who this rogue reaper is!