OK...im Going To cry bye...

Decent premise but not nearly enough detail to have the desired effect of pulling on the old heart strings. Not flaming or anything, but ones shots require much more than 687 words to build a complex story. Grammar is good though which is a huge plus. Just try adding more detail into your next fic and I'm sure it'll be great

That was so sad... :') I loved it... :')
-Ace of Owls

That was a good story. one of the saddest i have ever read. but it was good.

(is sad now)

cute story... (gets handkerchief)

SO SADDDD D:

But a nice ending that made me tear :')