Pls update this is a great fic!

OMG THIS STORY IS THE BEST, AND I NEEEEEEED MORE! (not to sound needy, but I do!) I love how you wrote the whole thing! Please update or at least tell us that it's discontinued.

From, Jay

This is bloody wicked!

I need more I need more more more!

course everyones demanding you just fucking tourtured then procceded to murder peter johnson- sorry percy jackson

I don't think max quite understands that demigods were bred for war

Surprised she seemed to be his physical equal

i have no desire to clean my dirty mind gehehe. I LOVE YOUR WORK

yeah sorry about the braces (non-genderized comment indicating you are a sentient being considering I think you're a girl but I don't know)... also good job on the story you're better than me which I wouldn't say was an achievement but i like to say it anyway have a nice day

Man at least you could've had the erasers hit camp and have a massive battle or something... Come on!

I really like this story. It is great, and I do hope you continue it. The only thing I want in this story is for Percy to tell the others about how he does and came back to life. So, please please PLEASE update soon!

That was so cool! It made sense to me! I might just be crazy, but all of that is could probably happen in real life if someone were to lose their memory, and not remember what some words meant.
This was the coolest chapter that I have ever seen in my life!
-Orangey

Please update soon.

This is really really good and I cant wait for more! Please update soon!

This is a pretty long story, but cause its such a darn good read!.. it feels a lot shorter than it actually is this is a really good story!