Lol

Sure Kenobi... we totally don’t suspect you like her... your just close friends...

YAY! I didn’t have to go back for me to find out if they know! Thank You Thank You Thank You Thank You Thank You!

Still can’t tell whether they know about the marriage or not...

Well I know he won’t turn until a later book (oops major spoiler) but this made me sad...

I forgot if they know about their marriage or not. BLAST! I have to find it. KRIFF KRIFF KRIFF KRIFF KRIFF!

Lol

Oh if only you knew... if only you knew...

This brings back memories when I first read this series when it first came out... Lol. I just realized I haven’t made my own account. Been 7 years. Wow. Way too late. Oh well. I might make one... someday...

Excellent. The author combined elements of suspense, excitement and romance, artfully.

“he did not like to just run in and blow things up if there was another way. If there wasn’t; then by the force, hand him a bomb”
Yeesss! Haha! 3
“you would rather die a violent death than a peaceful one?
I don’t know why but I just love this line!
“Obi-wan is doing to retire as a hermit on Tatooine” “the part that hurts most, Anakin, is that you were serious”

“I promise not to have too much fun taking down Dooku without you”
Haha Anakin you little pill lol lol
“I won’t do anything unintelligent, irresponsible, or impulsive, “
Oh like changing plans? Are you sure? Lol

“so, this is another one of your reckless attempts at keeping me safe because you’re’ an overprotective, untrusting maniac?” “something like that”
I love this, so awesome!

•I am really invested in this already
•Soo coming back tomorrow
“the entire palace. Actually, was filled with the light side of the force. It was disgusting.”
That’s what you get for surrounding yourself with Jedi!
“he had of course, ordered another copy of each Jedi’s battle plan from the council. For once the ever-heroic hypocrites had not protested”
Noooo! Whyyyyy! Hes a noncombatant he doesn’t need to know! I mean I know why but whyyyyy!
“he had long learned he could come to Palpatine for most things”
NO NO NO YOU CAN’T BAD IDEA ANAKING NO!
Lol
“just plain staring at her as she did her work”
Awwwww that so sweet! And romantic!
“wonder what in the universe the older man was doing.”
BEING EVIL! RUN!
Sorry I have a lot of Sidious related feelings
“I’m not even going to try to promise you that they will be alright. Death is a risk of war.”
And you would just looove it if Anakin lost all of the people he loves wouldn’t you!
“what damage could it really do?”
A lot changing plans always damages a lot
“you’ll need it I think”
You mean you know! Evil!

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•Impressive imagery
•I love some of the lines
“Nava Venerate”
Omg her whole name is AWESOME
“Obi-wan wondered how well Anakin would take that. Probably not well”
Noo kidding he hates being kept to a single plan
“the Jedi council is staying inside the palace to protect the senators, it ha been the chancellors”
Yep keep the assumedly best, off the field and win whatever evil plan he has set up
“she had saved his life in a way that no one could ever imagine”
Awwwww!
“negotiation; or a different way to do it. He was better at just convincing people that he was right.”

“Intrepid Camber”
I like the way that name feels on my tongue
““are you ready?”ready to become a peacekeeper instead of a soldier”
That’s the dream isn’t it? For those in a war?
“I think we’re irritating the senate with our celebrations”
Stuffy politicians lol
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What I liked about this story/chapter
•Great imagery
•Spot on characterizations
•Great lines
“Anakin Skywalker, a reasonably young and reckless jedi knight”
Lol that is a great way of describing him
“he so rarely received quiet anymore. He had not for four years.”
That’s so sad! And realistic!
“the entire Separatist army”
Yikes
“the pre-briefing, which Anakin had spaced out for.”
Anakin! Pay attention! You could miss something important! Lol
“the chancellor had proposed it”
Bringing politicians into a war zone. Yep. He’s evil.
“did not mean he wanted Padme to come to a battle zone too.”
Lol Smart Anakin! Good going! Also, lol good luck convincing her so stay out of the middle of ANYTHING.
“though he had only had Ahsoka as an apprentice for four years, the time span of the war, they were one of the closest Jedi teams in the order.”
Relationships forged under fire are often the strongest.
““I’m ready,” a good answer, because he did not know if he was ready.”
Poor Anakin
“as if he had aged by fifteen more years”
Yeah war does that to you still sad tho
“Anakin desperately wished he could hold his tongue
Yeeaah that’s called impulse control and you definitly need to work on that lol
“Trying to avoid Quinlan”
LOL!
“Obi darling, you give me too much credit! But it’s alright because I deserve all of it!”
I love this person already
“it is good to see you Nava”
Omg I love her name!
Well, Obi-wan, you didn’t starve him and he hasn’t died of your lectures so you couldn’t have been that terrible of a teacher”
lol
“having a good time watching Anakin’s misery”
Lol lol lol lol
““little Ani?””Say nothing”
Lol totally a sibling relationship!