Mirror of Words told me to come here. Not to THIS story, but it's short and I don't have much time so I can make it quick here:3

I love the way you write! I say that to a lot of people, but that's really what I love about writing, because every person can have a different style and a different way of putting words to paper and a different way of drawing people in - and the way you do that is amazing! I like how you describe things, namely Piko. :3 Your choice of words for describing him in so few sentences is really nice and I enjoy that(:

I love the thought of Piko being shy! I mean, I've always written him to be shy, but you do such a better job than I do because you explain the little things - like what he DOES when he's shy instead of just stammering. For example, "fiddling with his arm warmers". Not only is that a nice, small detail, but it also paints a very cute image of Piko in my head :3

(He's my favorite, if you couldn't tell xD)

And I really enjoyed this fic! So cute, so well-written, so amazing!

(:Mizune

This story is really good! I love the originality and even though it's short, the writing is very effective. The way things are phrased and described deliver such emotion.

I've been wondering about this for a while now but do you draw the art cover for your stories? If so, it's good. :) You draw better than I do. XD Without stick figures, I would be in trouble.

You totally got me there for a second. XD Since I saw Mayu and Piko in the character(s) list, I thought it was going to be Mayu who had feelings for Piko. I never expected her doll to be the one instead! It must've hurt a lot for Mimi to feel that way.

Btw, when I first read "obsession," the first thing to come into my mind is Tei. Sukone Tei, the UTAU who loves Kagamine Len.

Again, I liked this one-shot. It was really amusing and it really got me. XD I love how you turn things around at the end they always never fail to surprise me. This is exactly why I love your stories! I can never get anything right and in the end, I'm always like, "Why didn't I think of this?" or "WHY? WHY DID IT END LIKE THIS?" You always make me want to read more! It really pulls me in, you know? Ah, you play a lot of tricks. :) I like that!

Keep writing, okay? :D

Whoa, I wasn't expecting it to be Mimi that liked Piko. That's so cute! I truly adore this oneshot. My only problem would be that it starts in past tense and then shifts to present tense halfway through. Aside from that, this was very well done!

wow just wow... this was just amazing and so heartbreaking! in the end you really feel for Mimi and hope for her wish to be granted even though it's impossible.
Not going to lie but it almost feels like you could continue with the idea a bit longer though it's really good as a one-shot as well, fantastic job though! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

This is so interesting and good! Please continue

Ahhh, so it's the DOLL who harbors feelings for Piko. Or, perhaps, later on, Mayu will to and the friendship between herself and her Master will be pegged against them. This'll be an interesting read.

Incidentally, running low on inspiration (and just plain tired out! XD ), being able to log back on and see that you've written something else and posted up into the Archives make me giddy with glee. I love reading your stories! X3 I really need to get off my lazy bum and review more of your Fics, I can't get enough of them and you deserve the reviews.

What I like about this so far is the fact that you make Mimi come alive and not just some kind accessory to Mayu. And her crush on Piko is just too cute. Definitely going to fave and keep an eye on this. I can't wait for the next update!

Mipiko