Great, great story, but I posted a proper review on your art page. I feel it is more at home there with the whole work.

This was so perfect. Genuinely one of my favourite things that I've ever read.

I've read close to a hundred fics in a week and this one had me cry like a baby. Mistys monologue is epic. And this is the first fic, i reviewed, out of everything i read here. hope that means something.

If there's one thing that is clear in this wonderfully-written piece, it's Misty's heart. Her heart. Nothing more, nothing less, it has all been poured out right here full on. Even without knowing who the person behind that unsolved, not to mention super brilliant scheme was, like Misty, I am more than happy and satisfied. I totally enjoyed reading. Why, this fic took me away! :)

Please, keep up the awesome job!

Awesome story. With great dialogue. Aaml 4 ever.

I'm going to be totally honest. I didn't like this story very much. That is until I was able to hop onto a computer and check out the visual novel version. That was awesome! Really, the charming pictures add a lot to the story and help clue you in more. Great job! (And I understand if I offended you...I'm sorry.)