Reviews for Kin From The Stars: Incursion
BigBadAud666 chapter 14 . 2/15
System alliance: exists

ONI: OH SHIT THE REBELS
Guest chapter 3 . 1/11
Don't like the Spartan V project it makes no sense at all.
Azrael The Deplorable chapter 14 . 7/26/2018
Love how ONI love to make sense of nothing they do. The best way to buy the UNSC time is to not make contact at ALL, what do they do make make contact with them and to add to it hostile contact. Great job ONI you just dragged your humanity into a possible war against the Council and associated species, you need a round of applause *Claps*. Great job man thumbs up! No way exposing your new Spartans of Sanghelie, Quarian, Turian, Batarian, and of course humans. I have no idea how attacking the Citadel Council will help them stay isolated and in the shadows of the galaxy.
Divine Protector of Skyrim chapter 15 . 8/10/2017
Hey this is an amazing story you have here. What happen to you not updating this? Please come back to working on this.
JoeTan221 chapter 1 . 1/23/2017
Interesting
Kytor Icarus chapter 4 . 11/1/2015
Kelly Kurt and that lot are SII not SIII and their was not G company the two didn't have companies the threes only had A and B company so get it right. That aside I love what you did for the SV project and the armor lock reson the plot is grate so far and I like where this is going.
Good Luck to you sir and may the Elite Empire welcome you.
Nicholas.Diego chapter 15 . 5/25/2015
I hop you update this great story.. Not much story like this, secret empire within secret empire vs another secret empire who want dominating galaxy in the shadow was number one selling poin this sory..
Caliopy chapter 15 . 5/16/2015
... When are you going update?!
xThomas2 chapter 15 . 5/5/2015
This is one of the best fanfics I've read. Man, I did not see any of that coming, it is cool what you wrote from the very first chapter! There were a few times where chapters dragged on, but by and large it was good
xThomas2 chapter 1 . 5/5/2015
By the time I was halfway through the first chapter, I knew this wqs good.
Reichenfaust chapter 13 . 9/26/2014
The Tech advantages the UNSC has though, are the MAC guns, because of size, compared to the way smaller mass drivers of citadel space, and shield tech that can stop all sorts of incoming weaponry, whereas kinetic barriers only stop physical projectiles.

The UNSC should have reverse engineered plasma tech, covenant tech in general, cortana disected how a plasma turret worked while inside the ascendant justice, but said she'd need more parts to make it function again.

Forerunner tech would take longer, but even here the UNSC and Arbiter and Post-Covenant species have an advantage. Not only do they have ruins to search, but there are computers that hold their knowledge, there intact ships, and shield worlds.

With the reaper tech, you get the burned out husk of a destroyed enemy. Yes it will still provide insight, but nowhere near anything close to viable salvageable tech.

The citadel bring more advanced then the UNSC. Just because they use bullets, doesn't mean their less advanced. Those bullets kill just as sure as energy weapons will. Provided with coil acceleration, or railgun upgrades, metal projectiles are superior to energy weapons because they produce less heat. Not just that, but the UNSC has a faster form of FTL, that doesn't utilize eezo and can construct ships that are considered impossible, or improbable to feasibly build. That's not even including the Spartans and the Sangheili. The advances are in different ways, but the UNSC is more advanced when it comes down to it. Lets also not forget about Admiral Whitcombe's NOVA's that were developed. Yield that was 1.2 Petatons. Or roughly 80,000 Tsar Bombs... So, no halo tech is not lower than mass effect.
Ecomadness chapter 15 . 8/31/2014
Loving these last few chapters I can't wait for more.
Monkinator7 chapter 15 . 7/4/2014
This. Is. AWESOME! I was so looking forward to this kind of team-up between Garrus and Gamma Company. Besides that, it sad to know that Shepard has, although for 'righteous reasons', begun doing anything necessary to solve a possibly terrible future for all that is creation.
Sightbent chapter 4 . 7/3/2014
Good.
Sightbent chapter 3 . 7/3/2014
So what's going to happen now? I can't wait to read on and find out.
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