Reviews for Fate Shirou
jacob.dylan.hayesgmail.com chapter 2 . 4/27
Crack means crazy
Mr.Vegerott23 chapter 5 . 8/26/2019
Hope this gets continued.
EMIYA14 chapter 5 . 4/23/2019
Its been years and still no updates...
Pallan Minerva chapter 5 . 4/21/2019
If Shirou acquires a harem of girls including his alternate selves, you will have done a good job. I know it’s been six years, so the likelihood is low, but I think that nonetheless for a crack fic, you have made something good.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/27/2018
Oh god, that aria! I gotta admit, I laughed fucking hard at that. Seriously, that was just too dumb not to... Funny thing is I was really loving this aborted fic up to that point. I mean, think about it; ARCHER's aria isn't "I am the bone of my bow" you imbecile. I was willing to forgive the spear versions of kanshou and bakuya 'cause ALTERATION but god-damn, you had to go and fuck even that up! Sad really, you had something good here...
Guest chapter 1 . 8/26/2018
OK, this is fun. Based on the synopsis and some of the comments I was totally ready to hate this, but instead, I find my self enthralled. The prose, and grammar aren't perfect but they are good enough to not be an issue. The storyline itself is intriguing and just a pleasure to read through so far. I'm pleasantly surprised and eager to continue.
Lovnag chapter 5 . 12/14/2016
I have no other way to state it, therefore:
This is awesome.
Moar.
Sir Cookie chapter 3 . 12/14/2016
The reality doesn't grant powers. It is a library that holds the blueprint of the is Shirou's status as an incarnation of the sword that makes his reality marble the way it is. The reality marble forms from a alien mindset that doesn't match Alaya or Gaea. Shirou's abilities in tracing are from a higher aptitude in projection and decades of experience. Also no degradation exists of the swords in shirou's reality marble. Riders sword would have been as strong as the original. Flexibility in a sword without losing durability is merely a area of study in tracing. Any shirou can eventually figure out how to make a durable flexible sword, or make a sword into an arrow. It is the study of tracing, not the study of his reality marble that gives shirou any of these powers.

Also can't wait for rin to learn of how berserker powers up. Haha.
ZE Bri-0n chapter 5 . 1/26/2016
So we finally have a Servant who isn't Shirou. How interesting... shame that Lancer had to die for it, but he died well. To be clear, Avenger didn't survive Excalibur, right? She destroyed the Reality Marble that allowed Excalibur to exist before the blast could destroy her, right?
ZE Bri-0n chapter 4 . 1/26/2016
Ah... yeah, I think the other guy is right, Archer Traces a sword, uses Alteration on it, then memorizes the 'new' sword as a new and entirely different weapon.
ZE Bri-0n chapter 3 . 1/26/2016
Saver magus? Also, I'm pretty sure that normal weapons cannot harm Servants whatsoever, but even the non-NP weapons of another Servant can. Like Hasshi's daggers. Or Saver's gun, in theory. Which would be more impressive, if his opponents couldn't fire arrows faster than most machine guns, and further and more accurately...
ZE Bri-0n chapter 2 . 1/26/2016
Can we get some drawings of what the Servants look like or something?
ZE Bri-0n chapter 1 . 1/26/2016
Everyone summons Shirou... huh. This has serious potential to be either an epic story and an epic crack fic. Either way, can't wait to see what you make of it. Hope you keep the epic.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/5/2016
Continue the story please.
AoiKishi chapter 5 . 12/18/2015
Uwa, at last lancer is dead?
Well, dont worry.
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In my fic, kirei, lancer and berserker dead in first night.
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Zoken dead early morning.
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rider, asasin, caster, dead in 2nd night.
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Also, grail war ending at that same 2nd night with greater grail, mountain, and 3/10 of fuyuki erased from the world.
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It cant be help, gilgamesh Give raining A rank noble phantasm to earth. And Ea as final.
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