| Reviews for Beneath the surface |
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   Regin chapter 10 . 10/28/2011 I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon! |
| lule101 chapter 10 . 9/23/2010 I've got an idea for a Chapter. Vegeta comes And saves them and blows The elites spaceship. Or something like that, I'll talk to ya later. Lule101 |
| lule 101 chapter 10 . 9/23/2010 This is a great story, Please make more Chapters, pretty please? *pouts and makes puppy Dog eyes* Lule101 |
| zop chapter 11 . 1/28/2004 Superb! You've got superior writting skills with a cool stoy to boot. |
| don't know chapter 11 . 11/7/2003 update i know were you live |
| Tomandark chapter 2 . 11/2/2002 Oh man! I'm going to keep reading this until I pass out of exaustion! I LOVE this story! ANd I know that I shouldn't make this post a bulletin board, I need an audience for my first story! So please check it out! It's called The Agama Saga. It's six months after Goku defeated Il Shenron. It's up to Vegeta, Goten, and Trunks to save Earth from Agama, but more DBZ fighters will be added. So far Piccolo is fighting Freiza/King Cold Fusion in HFIL! Link: ?storyid1038748 |
| Pado chapter 11 . 10/14/2002 Wow, that was amazing. It blowed me away..please continue! _ You're a great author, I've been your fan since..you began writing, but I've always been shy to review...**blushes** I'm getting a bit nervous right now..I better leave before my brother Pikant makes fun of me...Review later! Luv ya..**blushes** Pado wz here |
| GohanVidel4Ever chapter 11 . 9/20/2002 Okay..this chapter seemed to like not be long...but it just dragged on for a while. The paragraphs seemed long too lol. Weird chapter too, I'm kinda confused. Get out the next chapter quicker than this one cuz I need to know what happens plus im confused and need anwsers loL! Great job! ~Sara~ |
| GohanVidel4Ever chapter 11 . 9/20/2002 Grr! No fair! I have to leave for school in like 1 minute so I cant read the new chapter! Crap! Well I'll be back at like...2:30pm dont you worry! |
| djFusion chapter 1 . 9/16/2002 oooooooooooooooooo! Brilliant! It's about time I found a new saga WORTH reading that has actual merit to be considered Dragonball Z material! This is REALLY good so far, I hope it gets better when I read the other chapters tonight. I think I have a feeling who one of the kids are... I wonder if I'm right? Keep writing! I feel like I'm watching a new episode! _ CONGRADULATIONS! |
| Guest chapter 10 . 9/16/2002 OKAY YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE! THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY AND I HAVE A FEELING THAT IT IS NOT GOING TO BE FINISHED! YOU MUST FINISH IT OR I WILL KILL THE AUTHOR! _ mwuahahahahaha ***j/k*** |
| Jade chapter 9 . 9/10/2002 No! it's not too late! The Z senshi will feel he otburst of ki and save her...Or... She'll do a gohan and unconsiensouly powerup and blast those morons. |
| Boogie Monster's Ball chapter 9 . 9/9/2002 it still is cool post more soon please |
| Wedge2 chapter 9 . 9/9/2002 I'm loving this story! I can't wait for chapter 10 now. Will Tenkei be able to resist becoming evil? And what about her mother? :\ |
| GohanVidel4Ever chapter 10 . 9/8/2002 Noooo...NO! You cannot take forever to get more chapters out! I will freak out on you, freak out! lol. I love this story and I gotta know what happens, and how long is a long time for you? I must knoooooooooooooooooooooooooow! You just hafta wright fast..lol this story is so good. ! Come oooooooooooooooooon! ! **Sara** |
