Why snow and "james"? James is dead and snow's husband is david. He just pretended to be james. But most people already know that after his engagement to abigail broke.

what a ride! thank you for taking us with you!

Finally! LOL.
Great piece so far. Looking forward to what's going to happen next :)

Great story. I enjoyed reading about their undeniable attraction and the trials they must overcome to be together. I also liked that they are expecting a child, a product of their true love. Thanks for posting.

Jazzy

i'm wondering who the stranger was.. and also whether or not anyone probably realizes Emma and Henry are with Regina so why burn the house down? stupid citizens.. :) can't wait for more!

hmm.. interesting..

well.. this is certainly an interesting take on the season 1 finale... hmm, can't wait to see where you lead us next! :)

A very special person introduced me to OUAT and this was my first swan queen fic that I read. I loved it, sap and all. You've set the bar high for future swan queen stories that I read from here on out.

That's sooooooo cute! Continuation story please!
Leann3

Super cute! Hope you'll consider a continuation story.

Eeep! So cute.

:-)

KUDOS!

Oookaaay this last bit was a little.. over-the-top sappy. But..

- I do love your Snow- which is really weird because I generally despise her, especially on the show.
- I also liked your Henry.. and usually I wish either Emma or Regina would discipline the little shit- so it's a nice change. (Seriously, could someone write a piece where he acts like a brat and one of his parents totally goes all hulk-rage on his ass. When he runs away, find him and drag him home by his damn ears or something. Argh!)
- The pace did seem a little fast, but overall it's an enjoyable story.

So aside from the nauseating fluff ;) and pace, I like it.

Emma's pregnant with Regina's child?I'm so happy for them!