Reviews for NS: Demise
EnchantressPhantomhive chapter 1 . 4/30/2014
More please! :'( don't let it be over...
Great chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
Sad, and misguided. Poor Naruto. Looking forward to more!
Belle'Masque chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
I loved Naruto child too! Poor Naruto! So tragic!
sana pam chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
this really is depressing! What was sasuke thinking! Pulling out naruto's wing just like dat! Did't he know dat he can't force anyone n make them hapy! But i guess he did'nt coz he did just that! Nice story but as i hav said earlier its a bit depressing!
STVamp chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
This story is so fucking sad that I was waiting for naruto to commit suicide just to get away from all of his pain. Then aleast he wouldve been happy
DDAA chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
This was a great read :)
Stalker-san chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
I liked it but the ending was crappy. :/ I didn't feel like there was some resolution just a lot of pain. I kind of wished Naruto killed himself that way Sasuke could go on a rampage, killing everyone and everything.
Brie92 chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
Oh my gosh this story had me in tears. I feel so sorry for Naruto and I just want to cuddle him and tell him that everything will be ok. :'(
You did a great job with this.
deathgod-121 chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
okay, so i am disappointed. not in the story, no way. it was really really good. but at the fact that this is a oneshot. like...what the hell man. no way should this be considered a oneshot. there are too many things that need to be addressed! common! you have to write more to this!
KORN chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
SOOO, HOW DOES IT END ;-;
slatedfox chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
Oh come on how can I not ask for more. So want to know what Sasuke will try and do to win back Naruto and if the mighty being can restore him as he was or will Sasuke fail and Naruto ends his pain. Loved the story thanks