Well, now I’d definitely like to feed Cano to the Wyvern. The PCP thing was a low move. Effective, but a low and cowardly act. I must say, your villains are truly threatening and sickening to read, but sickening in that good way us strange writers/readers like. ;)

-Empress Akitla

Another great continued story with your character Cano. Damn, that man is an evil sonofabitch! You seem to write that rather well, I love it 'cause it makes for a great story and you write great stories.

Oh my. That was so, so good. Poor Danny. He battled and never gave up and saved Steve too. Love him!

Wow! This was del8ciously evil and twisted! I loved it! There just isn't enough HurtDanny on the show! Thank you!

Wow Cano went really crazy. So sad for that to of happened. But he did this to himself. Though he was better than the others wanted to be top dog.

Every one of your stories sucks me in so deep that once I start reading it's hard to stop. Thanks for another epic bout of Danny abuse. lol :)

found this story this week and only got to read it today. Great story.

seems like an end that can have a follow up or sequel.

would love to see one in the near future.

great story.

Hii so I started watching five-0 recently and found myself immediately in love with Danny Williams so I'm working my way through all of your stories and its taking me forever but it's so worth it because all of your stories are amazing! You're an awesome writer and all your ideas are sick I have no idea how you come up with all of this but please keep going I love it! :) :) :)
I'm really nervous about the end of this one! Is Cano going to escape?

Wow, what an ending. Very nice story. Found myself laughing as the poor FTD guy had to grab the arrangement and practically run for the doors with an all but panicked expression on his face. I could just see a trail of pedals on the floor from the crushed flowers in his arms.

Very good conversation between Steve and Danny, as Steve felt guilty, as usual, and Danny let him off the hook.

I sense some Danny whomp on the way.

I think this is the perfect spot to end it. I'm sure Cano doesn't need anything else than the satisfaction that Danny doesn't know if it's over or not.

Maybe the end?! Aaaugghhh! Great story though - love Dr. Ramirez.

Great story! My alerts werent coming through so I didn't realize new chapters were out. I still am kinda hoping Cano escapes and shit hits the fan. I'm just too much of a danno whump lover I suppose!

Nice, and creepy at the end. Cano doesn't seem like he's done.

Great story! Sequel?